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Comic 4.11 - "Coach II" Preview




Comic 4.11 - "Coach II" Preview

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Also Tango’s mom 🙌🏻🙌🏻

Rainy

How did I miss this update??

Rainy

I believe the comic mentions Coach visiting with Suzanne--but off panel? And if I could re-write the comic, I'd edit that out. It doesn't make too much sense for a high school football coach to be traveling for an entire weekend in the Fall anyway.

Ngozi

Is this the first time in Bitty’s college career that Coach has come to see him play?? Or did he visit before and it was off-panel?

Oh boy, poor Bitty; that parental stress is so relatable. Also the "tries to be nice but is unintentionally offensive" vibes that Coach has been giving off is also relatable when it comes to parents. As always, loving the comics but this one hits close to home and I am stressed out about it...

Raylen

Coach is exactly like so many of the white parents of friends I know - perfectly amiable, polite and gruff, able to joke and be friendly, and completely not realize how hurtful the things he says can be. I have to say, I love the little things that showcase him as a character, but we're never led to hate hi. God, I feel so much for Bitty right now ;_;

I just want to beam Bitty my love.

Being around Coach chips away at Bitty's confidence. That's so sad to see. Hopefully, they'll have a much-needed conversation.

Octavia Atlas

I love how you’ve written Coach! He reminds me of so many people I know (read: my parents) who think they’re being inclusive but just don’t quite know what they’re doing around people unlike themselves. I could literally feel Bitty’s pain.

Also, Tango's mom and Tango with matching heart mouths. <3

"Your Friend" *cue Kill Bill sirens*

JEEZ. Between "your friend" and last comic's "that asian boy" I am just completely hit in the passive/micro-aggression feels of how-not-okay Coach is being no matter how cheerful. But as PG said earlier too, yeah, I don't know that Coach realizes what he's doing but man that doesn't make it any less awful.

Nagako

GOD the “your friend” comment just makes me think back to Hi Honey pt 1 and how much bitty has GROWN since then;;; i love

Masquerace

The tension just keeps rising! Also, text is missing an "in" after "live" in panel 6.

Aure Silvershield

oh my gosh this feels so much like the Family Day from freshman year with Jack and his dad....

Ahhhh love it!! Small thing but I think there’s an “in” missing before “San Diego”

Bitty was doing so well too, I know how he feels though. You can make as much progress in the world but all ot takes is one trigger to send you back. I'm thankful he has a rock solid support system there at the haus but lord howdy I am terrified for the talk with his dad

Oh poor Bitty! He's so tense and then to have that check!!!!

I feel like Coach *thinks* he's making an effort by offering to watch Jack's game? He just seriously has so little clue about how anything he's saying comes off. "Ha, there, I said Jack's name, how can you ask for a more supportive parent?"

BITTY! Just getting everything thrown at him today, physically, emotionally, the works :(

Julie

Having a bit of a stressful morning and thought reading this would help...reader, it did not. But I'm still happy to have read it!

I feel physically tense reading this..... which I'm pretty sure was the goal?? Y I K E S

Ally MacDonald

Insert kill bill sirens in panel 4

lmao right I think he's at like 3 right now :^) FRIENDLY....SOUTHERN...DAD :^))));;;;

Ngozi

Coach is really just throwing out micro aggressions left and right huh?

Eric Richard Bittle owns my whole heart and it’s breaking for him rn

My face journey: 😥😫🙃🙃🙃😱😱😱😱

I love that Dex is there because he was the one who checked Bitty at the beginning of his Sophomore year and you can see in his eyes that he KNOWS what’s happening

liminal

:(((( man, he must be feeling so overwhelmed

whoops alternate universe Bitty WOW JUST A SECOND

Ngozi

I was wondering how people would interpret that someone like you line lol

Ngozi

I don’t know if this is on purpose, but in the panel where he’s kneeling on the ice, his large number is 51 and his name is written “ELTTIB”

liminal

Oh! Poor baby! So much has got to be going through his mind right now! My heart hurts for him!

Karen Welborn

:^)!!! THANK YOU

Ngozi

indirectly coming out because you don't have that relationship with your parents, then not seeing your dad for months, and then having to play hockey while he watches and judges you. :)

Ngozi

"FRIEND," ugh!! And also "someone like you," like come on, Coach! grrrrr...

He's going through a lot!!!

Ngozi

I really wanted the coloring in that panel to reflect Bitty's buzzing, boiling, pale rage. :^)

Ngozi

"Some of the guys are gonna take naps and _______ before the game." Maybe a word missing here? Also, those tears 😩

Michaleen Melby

“Your friend” oh my god I feel Bitty’s rage.

I'm SCREAMING, omg I am a nervous wreck for this poor boy

Oh my God, poor bits. That's so unnerving! He must be feeling so frustrated 😭😭


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