Cavegirl: Dinner Date Page 2
Added 2022-04-21 15:34:16 +0000 UTCPage two of three! Hopefully I'll have the next page coloured by the end of next week. I've been itching to colour this page since I posted the pencils just under a year ago!
Comments
Manic I especially love how you drew the second panel where you depicted it with her clothes and her high heels still mainly intact but clearly and rapidly losing the battle with Diane’s increasingly muscular and growing body.
Ketch Fiftyseven
2022-04-23 23:01:33 +0000 UTCThank you! The glowing effects and the speedlines all build the drama and the tension. It's a favourite comic flex of mine!
Manic
2022-04-21 19:16:17 +0000 UTCWell, I would like to do a few more pages after this, but my workload is already too crazy right now!
Manic
2022-04-21 19:14:49 +0000 UTCI hope you do a cave girl regression, if not for this scene then somewhere down the line.
Jose Almeida
2022-04-21 19:05:35 +0000 UTCThere’s a page three? Probably bad news for those two dudes…
SAS_Art
2022-04-21 18:14:39 +0000 UTCReading Terry’s admiration of your amazing piece makes me realize how much I miss all of his stories in the Yahoo Group. Manic and Terry just know how to do it when it comes to the muscle growth community.
James Winfield
2022-04-21 17:17:56 +0000 UTCI can see why you were excited to return to work on this page! The original pencil work was already great, but the extra attention you put into this final page is nothing short of top-notch. The first thing that grabbed my attention (after the pulse-pounding transformation of Diane, of course) are the glowing effects around her body, and the "speed lines", for lack of a better term, transitioning from one panel to the next. This effect adds another visual cue of showing the progression from Diane to Cavegirl - it's these kinds of background details I find interesting and appreciate. Also, the revision and addition of dialogue and Diane's internal monologue are good changes from the original pencils. I didn't know that there was going to be a third page to this sequence - very much looking forward to that!
Terry
2022-04-21 15:59:14 +0000 UTCHuzzah!
Confidente100
2022-04-21 15:34:52 +0000 UTC
