Brenda Transforms
Added 2018-06-10 13:52:52 +0000 UTCI'm working on the second page, and when that's finished I'll add some dialogue. Any ideas?
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Panel three I'm thinking"Time to let Tawn out!"
Freedom-Legion
2018-06-11 08:55:35 +0000 UTCFirst panel: "no superhero Activity until One month and my moon calendar app tell me that today is full moon ... this time I can enjoy this fully"
John
2018-06-10 15:04:44 +0000 UTCWorks for me.
SAS_Art
2018-06-10 14:09:32 +0000 UTCIt's so good to finally see Brenda again! Tawn is one of my favorites. Lots of great stuff going on here. I like how you used only color to give the impression of a background in panel 2, and the extra effort you put into rendering the cat eyes in panel 3. You've also found a great compromise on rendering the moon--just enough variance in color to give it texture and form without rendering the surface in ink which can lessen its etherial feel. Of course great job as always on the mid-TF "money shot" in panel 5--the pose, anatomy and details are spot on and it pairs nicely with the previous panel as a progression. Finally, I like how you varied the sizes of the buttons in the last image to give a sense of closer proxmity to the button that popped first, and the jagged splash border of that panel is both an original way to fit it into the page and helps add a sense of movement and energy to the shirt bursting open. Outstanding work as per usual. Sorry, no suggestions on the dialogue though!
SAS_Art
2018-06-10 14:08:56 +0000 UTC"I forgot all about this...but I can't help fall in love with the thrill of it each and every time!"
Confidente100
2018-06-10 13:57:23 +0000 UTC
