Taylor Made - Chapter 4
Added 2025-05-19 07:11:36 +0000 UTCTaylor's first night at MIT takes an unexpected turn when his new roommate drags the reluctant freshman to a Boston nightclub.
This chapter turned out a few pages longer than the others - but I was having a lot of fun with these characters. π
Comments
We'll see what happens next!
Emory Ahlberg
2025-06-15 05:48:27 +0000 UTCRoommate angle never even occurred to me. Oh dear...
Thomas Tolliver
2025-05-22 13:54:57 +0000 UTCLMAO - Wes, you're absolutely right. And I went to college in Boston myself, so I really should've known better! π
Emory Ahlberg
2025-05-21 02:49:29 +0000 UTCEmory, like all your works, I am very much enjoying this story, but you have written the most unrealistic sentence ever, "...watched the city whiz past." Having just spent a week in Boston, traffic does not whiz by on a weekday afternoon. ;) :P
Wes Adams
2025-05-21 02:06:44 +0000 UTCWhat a beautiful sweet, sweet story Emory. The introduction of Abigail was a God send for Taylor. What a supportive, fun caring friend, exactly what was needed, and Taylor needed, as well as the only one who would have been able to cajole her into wearing a cute and tight black dress. It will be interesting to see where Taylorβs new bestie will take her next on her βgirlhood journey.β It was so lovely to see Taylor, for the first time, if only briefly (on the dance floor), begin to feel comfortable and relaxed in her own skin. I too am looking forward to, and curious about as to where this story will take Taylor?
Gemma
2025-05-19 20:51:42 +0000 UTCEmory. Again a lovely story. Maybe a lovestoryπ? A&T
Ryan
2025-05-19 17:23:54 +0000 UTC
