Great teacher Miko
Added 2023-01-13 15:13:26 +0000 UTCWARNING: The camera behaves strangely in some scenes. In order to reset the camera, press "backspace".
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Yes, i meant a girl chests on bf with another girl. I absolutely loved what i saw in sachi’s puppy and i cant get it out of my head…two girls standing on top of a guy, wiping their dirty shoes on him while making out and flipping him off is my new peak fantasy now thx to you xD
Supersimpleman
2023-01-15 12:37:23 +0000 UTCIf you mean when a girl cheats on her boyfriend with another girl, then I find it very hot and I plan to make a story with this type of ntr. If there are only girls in ntr, then I don’t know ... I didn’t think about it and didn’t find the works of other artists with such ntr...
WhiteB
2023-01-15 12:05:50 +0000 UTCAmazing work, i wish if in the next story there were more scene of dominating (shoe cleaning, foot worship/foot gagging, face trample) and the difference of age is very humiliating i love it. However the length and content of the dialogues was really great.
Alessio
2023-01-15 10:35:13 +0000 UTCI loved that this had shoe licking and spitting. The dirt details and the footprints were very good :) i hope to see more stories with these elements :p (what are your thoughts on girl on girl ntr?)
Supersimpleman
2023-01-15 10:16:24 +0000 UTCThanks sensei for this story I can't wait to see the rest :)
Zombieek
2023-01-14 06:11:05 +0000 UTCOkay. Well, if you want to do this style again, my suggestion would either be to flesh out each individual piece a bit more or to put more emphasis on the central character so we can experience the whole thing through her eyes, rather than emphasising the POV of characters who're only there for a few slides. Still, this kind of series of bursts isn't usually for me, so I'd appreciate you taking my suggestions, but I imagine others would prefer something else. Keep improving in a way that makes you happy and wanting to make more <3
Edranair
2023-01-14 01:31:41 +0000 UTCThanks for the feedback and I understand what you mean. As you can see I'm new to this and I'm trying out different styles. I look at the reaction of people, and depending on this, I change the style of narration of my future works.
WhiteB
2023-01-14 00:58:21 +0000 UTCIt's okay, but it lacks a central throughline. It reads more like a series of vignettes than a single piece. It's fine and it works very well for what it is, but it's not for me
Edranair
2023-01-14 00:18:37 +0000 UTCThanks!
WhiteB
2023-01-13 17:59:35 +0000 UTCIt wasn't what I voted for but still absolutely incredible work as always! Better than I thought it'd be and nice and long :) Poor boys
SmallLamb
2023-01-13 16:35:50 +0000 UTC
