Bimbo Book Club: Deleted Scene (4 ½)
Added 2024-09-22 04:54:00 +0000 UTCDeleted Chapter: “Bedroom Bimbo”
Wendy learns the joys of being a bimbo after a wild night with her husband.
Originally published as Part 5
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kiwibat
2024-12-07 19:23:00 +0000 UTCIs there any reason as to why this chapter was deleted?
TudZ4 .
2024-12-07 18:56:54 +0000 UTCmakes sense. i’ll keep it in mind during the rewrites
kiwibat
2024-09-24 15:16:28 +0000 UTCI felt similar, would have been nice to show that the husband was being manipulated as well and hadn't started off as the instigator.
Rodger Smith
2024-09-24 14:59:25 +0000 UTCappreciate the feedback.
kiwibat
2024-09-24 06:05:12 +0000 UTCWhile it was good I kind of preferred the path that the early stages showed. Having it shift from the friend to the husband was kind of dramatic and a little malicious.
Pyrrhus
2024-09-24 06:02:26 +0000 UTCunfortunately not. she was supposed to be a young mom, but who knows where the book could end up next
kiwibat
2024-09-23 15:16:39 +0000 UTCLoved this story, any chance Wendy's daughter is 18 and might find the book laying around the house?
Nomad
2024-09-23 15:03:17 +0000 UTCa few hours edit: it's up
kiwibat
2024-09-22 21:09:35 +0000 UTCWhen you re uploading it?
stephan
2024-09-22 21:07:41 +0000 UTC
