FULL EPISODE 69 π
Added 2023-02-10 01:16:17 +0000 UTC(Hello again π So I added that one extra last panel I mentioned, in order to reduce the cliffhanger and help you all with the waitingβ¦ π€£π)
β¦.Okay so this episode turned out kinda hornier than I thought, but I guess itβs okay since itβs episode 69β¦ (?) π€£π *Iβll leave-*
(Donβt get any funny ideas about what Keane is about to do at the end of the chapter btw.. π or do get? π)
Hope you liked this awkward mess and gay panic of an episode! π€£ Tell me your thoughts and see you soon! πβ€οΈ
Comments
SUBTLE KEANE, *SUBTLE*
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2023-02-14 19:39:59 +0000 UTCOh, Iβm definitely open to changing the text and panel order back to how they were if you guys preferred it that way! πβ€οΈ Aws, thank /you/ for reading!! π₯Ήβ€οΈ
Nicole Ant
2023-02-14 09:41:54 +0000 UTCLike another person mentioned (@C), I also liked the previous dialogue a little bit better, and I think that the panel first panels should be switched back too, just because I think it flowed better. It effectively shows that Keane was staring at Onyx after he flipped over, but here it shows as if that he was just looking at him from behind and then Onyx flips over. I just think it made more sense before. I also found it hilarious when Keane said, βI canβt believe he let me hug him. I thought heβd flip for sure!β Kind of makes him start to ruminate on their actions and feelings π But ultimately itβs up to the author, and Iβm happy to read this beautiful comic!! π
sunshine2919
2023-02-14 09:26:48 +0000 UTC
