It's time to play ch. 45
Added 2023-02-07 18:28:46 +0000 UTC
Comments
Wish you would tone down the religion stuff a bit it’s so wildly out of nowhere and doesn’t add anything. The taboo of incest alone should have been enough to make Lily’s reluctance explainable but this ultra conservative religious angle is just kinda off putting especially if it’s gonna be there the entire time it’s getting repetitive at this point, hopefully it gets toned down but at least the story is moving forward towards what the AO3 tags were 😂
Robert
2023-02-08 02:27:39 +0000 UTCAnd it would be cool to see Lilly come back to this same setup in a future chapter with more acceptance and really get lewd for her breakfast audience, loving this story so far! Keep up the great work
Pete
2023-02-07 22:28:43 +0000 UTC
