"Sensual Workout 2" - Patreons
Added 2020-07-12 10:51:41 +0000 UTCVery important episode, because Stella will play a big role in this story. You have to read the text well when there is Stella, to understand her characters, what happened to her, why Cheyl will be tender with her, have affection for her and will want to help her and also understand what it will happen in the next episodes.
Episode 3, next week where you will see in addition to Cleo and Stella, the appearance of Heather
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10 renders done already fr Ep3, but i stopped here i'm very tired. I will continue Wednesday or Thursday
pat
2020-07-12 15:47:57 +0000 UTCLooking closely, I maybe in error myself in IMAGE #63...the skin IS darker on the arm upstage of the viewer, so is Cheryl's. My apologies! <3
Liam Devlin
2020-07-12 15:27:18 +0000 UTCVery high marks this story has! Cheryl is definitively the thinker-planner here among protagonists! I thought the glances exchanged in the store-shopping scene were exceptionally well wrought as Stella and Cheryl checked each other out! You are on top of your craft facial expressions-wise throughout dear Pat! I almost, ALMOST cannot wait for Ep3! Bravo!!!
Liam Devlin
2020-07-12 15:19:01 +0000 UTCWow! I can see why Cheryl's altruism comes to the forefront after learning about how Stella's parents, and her (Cheryl's) late father treated her... poor dear. Cheryl will walk a fine line here to be NOT like her father and take advantage over Stella's naivete` to be sure! The hurdles to cross ahead is Cleo (relationship-wise), and then Stella's parents (if they object to Stella seeking employment finally). One picture edit error for you: IMAGE #40--Cleo's outfit is back up and on her shoulder when it is down exposing her lovely bosom in IMAGES #39 & #41. Visually speaking--I loved how Cleo & Cheryl finished Ep-1's evening off. That was tenderly done...and the sex scenes in the gym were very hot! A small ??? though--in IMAGE #63 as Cleo is departing, Cheryl seems very passive here...perhaps Cheryl's left arm be around Cleo's waist, or left hand on Cleo's shoulder? The intimacy of a farewell shared is missing is my point--evidenced throughout by their banter, and previous gestures, and touching one another here.
Liam Devlin
2020-07-12 15:14:11 +0000 UTC
