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"Beauty Salon 2" - Full version

I hope you will all like this 2nd episode :)

To be honest, the last sex scene is one of my best one ^^

Next episode next week.

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i clicked that heart thingy!

Camel

And yes, I DID like this episode. <3 :)

Liam Devlin

The girls are gorgeous, Pat! This has a plausible romantic setup, and delivery with the possibility of how Solene will view Justine's suggestion of bringing in Zoe as the "third-wheel" to their apartment over the Salon. My critiques are these: Storyline Character ages--> A basic 4year business degree for Justine would place her at about 22, not 21. Solene, who met Justine at same college ought to be at least (for a two year Associates degree) age 20. Missing at present from Zoe's story is how she is plausibly about to start a dance studio. Age 18? Zoe is awfully young to be striking out on such a venture. I would rethink their ages upwards, all three of them.

Liam Devlin

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