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*Please point out any misspellings or mixed up words, thank you!

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Indy_650

Thank you! See, super small issues, but I would have missed them. And yeah, source was fixed, but I will just fix that whole speech box.

Danie Fox

First page, common is missing an m and there's a wierd formatting error, looks like the font size changed almost, at "source of" Hoarded* on the second Otherwise, I think it's a fantastic start :)

Indy_650


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