Reverse Isekaied to My World 1 (FemJaune TG)
Added 2021-06-02 22:00:03 +0000 UTCIts done, I finally finished this wonder. This
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Thanks for the feedback, and something to keep in mind for the next part. Happy you enjoyed it, wasn't sure how well a story this story would be received so nice to see thoguhts on it.
Warden101
2021-08-04 15:20:07 +0000 UTCOverall very good. Some Advice I have is make the timetable of events a little more clear. Also it could have been a bit more clear as to how they realized what Jaune was changing into. It felt a little jarring. Other than that, excellent story.
matt
2021-08-04 07:12:40 +0000 UTC
