*Rework* Chapter 321 - Ryun
Added 2022-02-10 10:02:42 +0000 UTCReworked the last chapter. New chapter later today.
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I didnt realize this needed an edit but wow. This is why you make the big bucks. Take my money. Give me num num chapters to consume.
drag0nreb0rn
2022-02-11 06:18:39 +0000 UTCMuch improved thank you!
Karthic
2022-02-10 16:05:10 +0000 UTCThey're two different titles
Oxylus
2022-02-10 13:58:55 +0000 UTCThank you for the rewrite, it is a great improvement. But, I think there is still one mistake with the stats. In the congratulatory message, the increase for intelligence and wisdom is stated with +500, should this not only be +200, as it relates to the Lesser Crucible of the Mind title?
theend
2022-02-10 13:25:00 +0000 UTCVery good edit it explains a lot more. Thanks!
Debiruman
2022-02-10 11:46:33 +0000 UTCVery much appreciate the edit - feels a lot more impactful & personal now, and less like exposition.
Charlie
2022-02-10 10:13:18 +0000 UTChttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tGDiDbdvjOI Music for the chapter just in case Kal doesn't edit it in later.
Codered999
2022-02-10 10:07:36 +0000 UTC
