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Status Update - chapter 121

Hey everyone!

I've just handed over the first half of chapter 121 to my editors, so I'm looking forward to finding out what they make of it. :-)

It's half-term here in the UK at the moment, which means my pace has slowed a little over the pace few days. I hope to have the chapter completed for you by the 14th April, but I'll let you know if there are any delays.

The feedback to the paintings by Dave were overwhelmingly positive, which I wholeheartedly agreed with. It was wonderful to finally see the girls in a line up like that and I'm eager to see more, especially Faye, Helene, and the Nymphs!

If any of you happen to know of any good spacecraft artists who might be interested in commissions, please let me know. There are lots of ships and scenes I'd still like to see, which I'm sure would make good eBook covers.

Bye for now!

Tefler

Comments

Thanks for the reply. I see your point; however the concept for needing a back up was introduced early on with Illith destroying the terran server and with Nexus. I'm not a server admin either but i'm aware of the concept. If it were me I would have built a back up at the same time. To set up fabricators to fabricate the parts it would not be much trouble to produce a spare. I would have put one on the Raptor just in case they might need to abandon ship, and for instances like when John went out of range to fight the Kirix. Anyway thanks again for the reply and I enjoy the story so far.

The only way to backup Faye was to construct a new Progenitor server. No other hardware they possessed had the storage capacity to back her up. The gateway server was running security for the Invictus' data network and didn't have the capacity for Faye's files. When she was freed from the hacking deck, she expanded exponentionally, taking advantage of all the free space her new supercomputer had to offer. Dana's a self-taught engineer, not a server admin. Building new guns and armour took precedence over spending several days constructing a spare server. Irillith is a hacker, not a server admin. Her mentality is to break into servers, not worry about maintaining them.

Tefler

Am I the only one wondering why Fey did not have a back up server? Nexus had a back up, even the terran server that Illith fried had a back up. Arn't Illith and Dana supposed to be smart? Seems pretty dumb they would not have created a back up on a dedicated power supply. Even more so knowing if that server failed all data would be perm destroyed and unrecoverable.

No update of chapter 125 being handed over to the editors. I don't see 125 happening by the 24th like the Discord update claimed.

That's a damn good question! Waiting for new updates for this long is a pain in the arse! Even I don't wait this long to update my patrons!

Is tefler all right and in good condition. I am retired and am living day to day for my next chapters

I agree with Alex on this. Being a writer myself, I can tell you that quality of material takes time. You have to make sure that all events written tie into each other and are relevant to the flow of the story. You can't just cobble something together out of thin air and expect it to be a masterpiece. You never rush quality. It will take as long as it takes.

I remember learning of crowds waiting on the docks in NYC for installments of Charles Dickens' and Arthur Conan Doyle novels. They were published in magazines and fans would line up for copies. The withdrawal is real and has been around for more than a century. As a fan of Tefler's, I can say that 3SM is just as enjoyable as anything I read getting my BA.

commatoes

Agree with Bill, after all he states on his patron levels description "I currently aim to release three chapters per month, at between 25k-30k words per chapter."

Chill. Quality takes time. We should be more than content with the fact he puts out a high quality 1-2 chapters a month.

Okay, it is long enough to post the next chapter buddy. We are now into May for goodness sake

Oh for fucks sake. Wheres an f5 that works!?

Richard

Teller, just want to share my support for you. Cliffhanger was rough, but take your time

: I doubt L would hack the network. Athena said Irilliths skills were unheard of before John created them

If the tfed security is not a problem for John and the girls its probably even less for lark

I imagine that the Astral Monsters aren't trying to kill all the other Progenitors. They only tried killing John after he refused to play their game.

Jedi Khan

Great observation!

John Jameson

It is possible that he was told not to leave the planet as punishment. He sent his pregnant girlfriend to give birth elsewhere as a loophole.

Benj

So, why did Rahn’hagon spend the past ten thousand plus years on Arcadia? He should have had the knowledge and been able to scavenge technology from the ship if he wanted to leave... so, why did he not want to leave? Temporal tricks that could come into play here for 121 include precognition and temporal reversal, both of which we’ve seen in this story.

Evan

Do the math: Tefler can write absurdly fast at times, but he typically does not do better than one chapter (30K words) per 10 days, i.e. 3K words per day. At 8:30 BST he still had 2K words to write (after a break for dinner). So there could be a lot of midnight oil here, and 1am-3am releases are typical.

John Jameson

probably wrong

My guess? Another hour and a half, at least. I’d be happy to be wrong.

Evan

F5?

GrandPaM

The freaking timeline us going to explode with four Progenitors and one Lioness with dueling procog' abilities. :)

Im sory for those people. We have been, and i believe i kan speak for most uf us paetrons, folowing this amazing story for in some cases for more than a year... in my case almost 3( first on lit and a year or so ago i comited). People, tefler is one of the most amazing authors out there, dare i say that if this story had not beguin as it did so heavily sexual in nature, he could be in the same league one day as mr martin or mr brown. This is a shout out for someone in the publishing world because this person, in my opinion, has the talent and creativity to make it out there as a main streamer. I realy think that were ever tefler takes john and the girls, i for one will folow. And when TSM has run its course, i will continue to folow this amazing writer. Now please look in to your selves and tell me felow Patreons if you will no do tbe same?

Ricardo Miguel Pereira da Silva

Tefler has said 121 starts in the Raptor. We'll see how that goes in a few hours. He just popped up on Discord and said he had another 2k words to write, which he would get to after dinner.

Jedi Khan

i totally feel you. and i didnt mind the cliffhanger that bad. but ALOT of people did not appreciate that rough of a cliffhanger and so im pretty sure he knows it wouldnt be a good idea to string people alot for another 2 week just for fun

Neither. I am only awere of why the chapter got delayed. And my kids are also on spring break. The truth is there was this thing called GoT maratons going on in the week before the new episode of the 8th season... and i kan relate to that. Even beeing on vacatikn for thia la

Ricardo Miguel Pereira da Silva

lol youre either trolling or crazy ricardo

Most likely we will not see eny developments in the invictus crew situation maybe for more than 1 chapter. So many side stories yo folow...the maliri in trankaran space. The daughters of baelora house, the sons of buckingham, pearl and tony and the other one, olimpus developments, kintark empire under tamolith, enshuno encroachment,

Ricardo Miguel Pereira da Silva

Chapter 121: two words "The End". I would laugh so hard if Tef did that

Frostfyre

Bugger, got a notification from Patreon and got excited. Continue F5.....

I'm with ya

Horny Rhino

Proginator sounds like the title of those close encounter aliens, lol. I think you mean Progenitor, as in like Pro janitor. I mean that still fits with John's previous impeccable cleaning ethic on the fool's gold.

Forbsey

Midday GMT F5 F5 F5

Hell knows no fury like a woman scorned - while they are not scorned Larn’ is in for a nasty surprise when a group of enraged superpowered girls and a female proginator goes on the offensive. Can’t wait for 121.

Kim Biel-Nielsen

reckon chapter 121 ends in an ever bigger cliff hanger? :)

rich ed

It's still possible he's going to throw a massive twist and the end of 120 will end up behind avoided due to Calara's abilities.

if you die will tef acknowledge your sacrifice and give us the story early? If that is the case.......

TF4EVA

was your home cut in two by a progenitor's purple beam and you are in the half spinning off into space separated from the power core?

TF4EVA

take your time mate. we are all anxious to get another chapter, but make sure its to your liking before publishing it. always be happy with your work instead of rushing something because we get impatient :)

the suspense is killing me!!!!!!!!!!!!

No worries, and thank you for the update!

Evan

Oh well, just gives us another day to Bitc.. about chapter 120, Ha! Bring it on!!!!!!

Thanks for the "heads up!"

Arrowglass

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.........................Oh well off to work

B S

So the first half won't be out soon? I am just trying to understand when to hope to see what happens after that epic cliffhanger

Tyler Poore

Hey everyone. To avoid you wearing out your F5 keys, I thought I'd give you a quick update. I'm still working on chapter 121, but there's still a bit to go so I won't be finished tonight.

Tefler

F5?

GrandPaM

There all kinds of possible directions right now...the assassins after Lynette,Jehanna, Maria, Henry Voss, etc...the traitor in the fleet working with the Brimorians...the assassins acting on behalf of the Brimorians...the Kintark...the drama with Anna, etal...the Kirrix are still in there...how Rahn's plans all this time are going to affect them...and of course the obvious John and the girls! I...for one at least...love the fact I never know what Tefler is going to come up with next...from what direction...and thoroughly enjoy being surprised and definitely entertained!!! Soooooo...savor the fact were are going to get what we will get when we get it...LOL!!!!!!!!!!

Arrowglass

‘Late on the 15th’ — we’re not even close to that, yet. Ask again in a few hours.

Evan

F5?

GrandPaM

Or we could support our author and everyone could stop whining about the last chapter. It was good, something decimating hadn’t happened in ages. No, I wasn’t happy but it was a good read!

Tef, because I have a sick sense of humour, in my opinion it would be hilariously if you uploaded Chapter 121 with just the caption: "You know I had to do it to em" and left it as that xD But in all seriousness I am quite literally dying inside. First Avengers Endgame, then Chapter 120. This month has been one of unbearable anxiousness.

Nathos

All I know is that 121 needs to be very good or me and a few others will be reading over on SOL for awhile before we consider coming back to Tefs Patreon Site.

F5

em110905

F5 F5 F5 F5 F5 F5 F5 F5

i sure hope the chapter is published today, cant wait to see what happens to Larn K's punk ass..... the girls are gonna tear him a new one.

Taco1085

The Dawn will be when Alyssa psionic Nova blasts his punk ass....

B S

Start re reading from chapter 001, like the rest of us?

Kobie - I hear ya! I was shocked, traumatised and impossible to live with for a couple of days after reading it. Now, I’m in a quandary about how to treat 121. Do I: 1.Plunge in as usual, and risk getting even more wound up; or 2. Read the end first and if it seems so-so OK then start from the begin knowing, hopefully, that I’m not going to be gutted again; or 3. Do I wait for feedback from others here and on Discord, and when there’s enough info decide whether the chapter is safe to read. Decisions, decisions...

Timbo

I've been furious as hell all week since i finished 120. Tefler hit me in the feels mad strong with that ending.

Can i be honest?

Just finished 120.. wow! Im glad I don't have to wait very long to continue the story. Keep up the amazing work Tefler!

At least now I have something positive to look Forward to on this day of the most horrendous days in the US (tax man comes). Looking forward to a new chapter.

Those of you coming in where prior post are covered, the latest is: Tefler I've still got a bit to go, with half-term slowing things down. At the moment, I reckon I should be finished late on the 15th.

Game of thrones, Star Wars trailer and chapter 121 in a 48 hour period. Intense. 😊

Chicken

*Wink* You have 2 wait..

Robster

Yep.. see Jedi Khan's remark

Robster

Been refreshing my email all day.

Dave Barrack

Love the name. So far I found the maintenance bots a bit naff, but your suggestion points the way for them to be cool. OTOH, if Faye loses her baby bot while fighting for the greater good, she may learn something.

John Jameson

As long as Fae2D2 survives....

Well, at least I'll have enough sleep going into Monday.

I've still got a bit to go, with half-term slowing things down. At the moment, I reckon I should be finished late on the 15th.

Tefler

F5 F5 F5?

Jeff

really looking forward to reading it

raymond sisko

Thanks for the 411 khan!

Godzilla511

Tefler commented a few hours ago over on Discord that due to the mid-term break for mini-Tef from school, writing has been slowed a little. He's now looking at the 15th for when 121 will be out.

Jedi Khan

there is a TSM Shirt..... how did i miss that

Taco1085

can't Wait

Is it too soon to hope for chapter 121 at 0:33 AM UTC? ;-)

BFCP79

28 hours to go. 🤞

John Doe

Then everyone got mad at me on patreon but they don’t know what’s good for them.

Alphaonetango

Thank you for being awesome!

Tefler sure is taking a long time to write "Everyone died, especially your favorite Lionness. The End."

I keep thinking that this is a game to them out of boredom remember what Nexex (sp) said about the human race.

jerry661

Those scenes with Ailantha and Larn from Chapter 100 really repay rereading: lots of hints about the "family reunion" which is about to take place, their realisation that John "does not know what he is supposed to be doing", Larn's concern when it looks like John will be killed....

John Jameson

Nope, he was viewing John and the girls as they descended towards the surface, but then instructed that Ailantha zoom in on John, as he wasnt interested in his thralls. Larn has no idea that John has given psychic powers to all of his girls.

andrew finlayson

i have wondered when that attack will happen and how it is going to go down. I do hope Charles does not get killed, Can you imagine an assassin's look on his face shooting them and nothing happens and they clean their butts up with advanced weapons.... Tefler really left some intrigue with the newely upgraded ships heading off to the Brimorian boarder... and what will happen... so much going on, the girls in the Raptor, John abducted and his father. His mother a total mess. the Invictus cut in half.... At least John has given the girls the tools to overcome and make decisions and make a difference where Larn is shit up a creek without a paddle if something happened to him......

Taco1085

I am looking forward to Lenette and Jenna fucking up the would be assassins with their dana invented shields and none stop firing hand laser pistols (probably cannons if Dana is up to her usual tricks). I wonder if Jenna saves the guard that has issues with her being so close to the leader of Terra? Plus Maria's perceptiveness and her team of close personal protection. This should be fun...

rich ed

There are 8 books in the series (so far) also available at Storiesonline if anyone fancies dipping their toe.

ringill

Cant wait for 121! im on the edge of my seat after that last chapter.

Thanatos95

just bought the print version of eric olafson series from amazon to read between postings

I looked for TSM shirts...

I'll e mail you

Hey! There's no desperate rush. I'd love to see some of the ships from the story as 3D renders. :-)

Tefler

If you want to see some of my work www.atlantascreenprints.com go to gallery.

Oh and I won't charge you, so the price is right. Just give me credit if you use anything I do for you thats all I ask. I make money on t-shirts.

Tefler I've been learning a 3D rendering program so I could create ships and then view them from any angle to set up scenes. I'll be able to create very realistic images soon. I would also like to finish some of the images we worked on together initially. I am limited in the turn around time as I run a business so if you need images quickly I understand. But i'm pretty good, and I'm meticulous about proportions and accuracy as opposed to just make it cool even if it does not fit the descriptions. I've been a professional graphic designer and illustrator for 42 years and my work has been published 100's of times CD covers, fantasy conventions, corporate logos, web sites and events of all kinds. Lets reconnect and see if I can create something you like.

It's like Game of Thrones. Jump on in, the blood's fine!

J B

When 121 appears I’m not sure I’ll be able to open it! My options are: 1. Go to th end and skim, see if things sound OK-ish, then start from front reading it or 2. Wait for you guys to post up commentary and if it sounds too dire, stay away for another chapter.... I need to know things will be OK before I can immerse myself. What a wimp... <<sigh>></sigh>

Timbo

Agree completely. The poor old girl may be the one real casualty from this first encounter in the battle to come.... I’m considering a black armband... 😩

Timbo

just wanna say tef 119 still not final just wondering if its good yet?

Well then. See you then man.

Alphaonetango

I still weep for the Invictus, it was like losing an old friend

Stuhero

140 hours and counting down! Thanks for the update.

Old Cruiser

*Whistles and tries to step casually to the side to avoid the inevitable mob with torches and pitchforks when the above comment is read*

commatoes

Thanks for the update Tefler.

Cignal

From 120: “If we can learn to protect ourselves, we would have a much greater chance of survival...” she argued, a cunning gleam in those hazel eyes. Before you mention that Leylira has Amber eyes. Just making sure eyes aren't playing tricks on me. ;)

So my suffering shall end in the foreseeable future? *Happy Dance*

commatoes

Why the rush???

Hurry please lol

need now....

Simorthelast

that said, how can i become an editor so i can get the first half a bit sooner

Jeff

Have you considered a commissioning a comic series?

Michael

Not first

DemonHunterCole

woohoo can't wait!

TF4EVA

Thanks for the update

LunarLilith


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