Chapter 107 - complete (and status update!)
Added 2018-08-12 01:22:29 +0000 UTCHey everyone!
Here is the completed version of chapter 107 which had previously been posted in two parts. I've fixed some typos and grammar mistakes, but there wasn't too much different in terms of new scenes.
I've just handed over the first half of chapter 108 to my editors and I'll start working on the second half while they take a look. With a bit of luck, it should be finished by about the 16th August.
Tefler
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May if come to pass. May it be thusly
Ricardo Miguel Pereira da Silva
2018-08-27 14:42:37 +0000 UTCTefler, if you're reading this, and it's after 02:00 and before 06:00 on August 19, then go to sleep! We'll wait... :-)
Evan
2018-08-19 02:11:39 +0000 UTCLooking like a no go. Surprised we didn't at least get a heads up. Good night everyone.
2018-08-19 02:09:55 +0000 UTCif only
Jacek Tyburski
2018-08-19 02:08:18 +0000 UTCWe still could. Maybe he's dozed off at the keyboard and will wake up momentarily to realize how late it is and post the chapter.
Jedi Khan
2018-08-19 02:08:00 +0000 UTCwell, it's 4 AM where I am. I don't think we're getting anything today
Jacek Tyburski
2018-08-19 02:03:42 +0000 UTCPreach it brother!!!
Anthony Kester
2018-08-19 01:41:58 +0000 UTCby the great maker
2018-08-19 01:40:49 +0000 UTCCrazy...don't you dare! Brothers! ...and sisters... Let us bow our heads and pray to the almighty Tefler, so that he may grace us with more of his holy word! Raise your voices so that he may hear our prayers! *groans* Damn it, Crazy.
Jedi Khan
2018-08-19 01:36:14 +0000 UTCLike, there are no guilty inmates in a prison ;-)
2018-08-19 01:13:25 +0000 UTCI am SO ready to read!
2018-08-19 01:12:46 +0000 UTCDoesn't matter what day he posts the first chapter in the month, as long as the second is posted before the end of the month, he'll get money for both. Patreon does their billing at the end of each month, so it works out.
Jedi Khan
2018-08-19 01:12:36 +0000 UTC*shrill whistle, throws yellow flag on the field* Bad sportsmanship. Offense. JFL. 4 day penalty. Second down.
Jedi Khan
2018-08-19 01:11:18 +0000 UTCThey will be ready at roughly the same time.
Cody Strong
2018-08-19 01:09:26 +0000 UTC@Evan Well said, I know I don't miss a chance to spend time with my boys when they will let me. Teens are kinda hit and miss like that tho. Besides, I don't know about you all but what Tefler gets from one chapter a month is enough to get buy on just fine.
Cody Strong
2018-08-19 01:08:34 +0000 UTCOh no. Am I the only one who has failed to realize that the Bamorians will be ready to invade before of the POWs and capture ships are returned. John and the girls may end up rescuing the Kintark.
2018-08-19 01:01:22 +0000 UTCI believe you JFL
Anthony Kester
2018-08-19 00:50:05 +0000 UTCWe will probably see an update from Tefler within the hour, he has posted as late as 3:00 am his time.
2018-08-19 00:48:36 +0000 UTCI am innocent!
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-19 00:46:12 +0000 UTCWhat stunt?
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-19 00:45:47 +0000 UTCJacek, strange as this may sound to some, money is not always the most important driver in this context. Tefler has a young child and family obligations during the summer months that don't necessarily exist the rest of the year. Spending a beautiful summer day with your child = priceless. Hopefully, all is well and he'll get it done soon, but it's certainly not the most important thing in Tefler's life to do so. Important, yes, but not the most important.
Evan
2018-08-19 00:45:16 +0000 UTCJFL your credibility card has been revoked after that stunt from last time.....lol
2018-08-19 00:41:44 +0000 UTCit's strange though. It's pay per chapter system, so if Tefler releases before the 14th of each month, it allows to release two chapters a month (or half chapters). This way he gets two contributions a month. if it's released too late, he gets only one.
Jacek Tyburski
2018-08-19 00:41:12 +0000 UTCNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anthony Kester
2018-08-19 00:37:40 +0000 UTCHe said it will be next week
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-19 00:35:26 +0000 UTCI'm about to start crying!
Jacek Tyburski
2018-08-19 00:30:51 +0000 UTCNo memo yet
Anthony Carrillo
2018-08-19 00:26:21 +0000 UTCDid i miss the memo?
Benj
2018-08-19 00:24:19 +0000 UTCApprox 00:55 coordinated Mars time.
John Jameson
2018-08-18 23:26:08 +0000 UTCIt's 1215 am gmt
Anthony Carrillo
2018-08-18 23:16:00 +0000 UTCIt's on discord
Braw
2018-08-18 23:05:34 +0000 UTCI know I have said it before but we need a support group so we can be there for each other while we wait. TSM anonymous!
2018-08-18 23:04:07 +0000 UTCStill 8 hours till the 19th here
Old Cruiser
2018-08-18 23:01:30 +0000 UTCTwo minutes to go
Old Cruiser
2018-08-18 22:56:52 +0000 UTCOoooh I would so love a book signing!! But traveling to the UK just for a book signing... I think my girlfriend would leave me cause she would think me finally snapped and bat shit crazy...
MaydaysSin
2018-08-18 22:41:43 +0000 UTCI think his kids are in bed at 23:40
Braw
2018-08-18 22:39:18 +0000 UTCWell im going to be mature an say. Give your time to your family. We will still be here tomorow.
Ricardo Miguel Pereira da Silva
2018-08-18 22:24:07 +0000 UTCSOL is storiesonline.net
Anthony Carrillo
2018-08-18 21:52:23 +0000 UTCWelcome Sam.
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-18 21:51:32 +0000 UTCDread the thought. Tefler's chapters are like novelettes. The thought of waiting a year for each one is horrifying.
2018-08-18 21:50:44 +0000 UTCSo what is SOL ? I found Tefler on KU after the third book went to see if he had a patron account and after reading a ton of posts found literotica and read all the stuff I missed. I pay E William Brown 5 dollars a month so I decided Tefler needed the same from my point of view. Just didn't think 2 dollars was enough.
2018-08-18 21:49:02 +0000 UTCWhat would we do if this was like any other novel, where we had to wait a year between stories. I for one would lose my mind waiting.
2018-08-18 21:42:00 +0000 UTCWelcome back? :-)
Evan
2018-08-18 21:27:21 +0000 UTCKurt, I would not recommend that unless either Lit has its own equally premium section, or Tefler plans to stop making the story freely available, entirely. Otherwise, you're just singling out SOL readers, and I don't know what purpose that would serve other than to irritate them.
Evan
2018-08-18 21:25:59 +0000 UTCLol,... waiting sucks!
JollyRodger
2018-08-18 21:22:31 +0000 UTCApproximately 1:41:00 to go, would be my guess, but I'm quite content to be mistaken in this matter, in either direction.
Evan
2018-08-18 21:19:41 +0000 UTCArghh how long to go.
Jim lynch
2018-08-18 21:15:06 +0000 UTCHi Tefler, have you considered moving TSM to the "Premier Members Only" section of SOL? That might motivate more of your loyal followers to pony up. SOL let's me download epub version of TSM for my text to speach program.
2018-08-18 20:43:08 +0000 UTCWhere is it DAMN IT!!!! This is just cruel.
Bigfoot
2018-08-18 20:40:42 +0000 UTCChapter 108 Hey everyone! Here is chapter 108. Hope you enjoy it! I've just handed over the second half of chapter 108 to my editors and I'll start working on their feedback on the second half after they take a look. Tefler
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-18 20:34:47 +0000 UTCDoes his Irrilith immitation and looks through the data exchange network to find it.
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-18 20:19:37 +0000 UTCDing! Ding! Ding! Tefler is fittin to post!
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-18 20:16:57 +0000 UTCI'm checking every 15-minutes.
2018-08-18 20:03:17 +0000 UTCOh Man! Thank you! I haven't listened to "Hair o the dog" in ages!:)
2018-08-18 19:53:48 +0000 UTCit is 20,40 bst UK time so max 3.20hrs to be to day
2018-08-18 19:40:02 +0000 UTCLol
2018-08-18 19:34:19 +0000 UTC45 min
2018-08-18 19:33:27 +0000 UTCt-1 hour and counting down!
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-18 19:19:55 +0000 UTCWaiting for 108 now!!
Sushant Bhartiya
2018-08-18 18:27:16 +0000 UTC<a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4RFeIj-xwEM" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4RFeIj-xwEM</a>
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-18 18:22:40 +0000 UTCt-2 hours and counting!
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-18 18:11:29 +0000 UTCT - 3 hours!!!!
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-18 17:08:42 +0000 UTCJesus, John. Have you considered a hobby? Perhaps knitting?
2018-08-18 17:02:36 +0000 UTCHmm, ok. I gonna try the nap option. Will check back after.
2018-08-18 16:54:02 +0000 UTCT-three and a half hours!
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-18 16:31:38 +0000 UTCHitting F5 - looking at watch - hitting F5 - looking at watch - has it stopped - listening to watch - no sound - hitting F5...........
Kim Biel-Nielsen
2018-08-18 16:20:30 +0000 UTCSo I just read the combined parts of 107. There were a couple parts added at the very end of the chapter (a few hundred words, I think) that weren't there for the 107 part 2. If any of you haven't read the combined portion you might want to check out that section.
Roethan
2018-08-18 15:55:33 +0000 UTCI've missed you guys...
2018-08-18 15:08:55 +0000 UTCTick tick tick
Wombat
2018-08-18 13:51:11 +0000 UTC7 hours
2018-08-18 13:29:50 +0000 UTCGo to sleep already! Time will go by much faster that way.
Jedi Khan
2018-08-18 09:57:48 +0000 UTC11 hours!
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-18 09:10:34 +0000 UTCThanks for that tip Evan, I'm another that didn't know.
2018-08-18 06:31:18 +0000 UTCIgnore this typo Tefler. you can get it right for the E-Book, but concentrate on Ch 108 for now. we will all understand!! :-)
2018-08-18 06:30:04 +0000 UTCIf JFL's countdown is to be believed, we're probably looking at another 15 hours before release. I'm leaning more towards 19 hours before release, give or take a few hours. Tefler has posted as late as 3am London time, 7pm Pacific (USA), in the past.
Jedi Khan
2018-08-18 05:43:43 +0000 UTCHe crept along, the sounds of assault rifles and high-calibre machine guns rattling in the air. Flashes of light up ahead alerted him that they had somehow doubled back to the Mortimer cavern and as he finished a final turn, he finally understand why. Shouldn’t it say ‘he finally understood why.’?
Dennis Banfield
2018-08-18 04:46:16 +0000 UTCOh my god it’s new chapter day I love these days there my favourite days of the year give or take 1-2 ie birthday and xmas. I just wish I knew what time it’s coming at so I could sleep till then so it seems to come quicker lol. Come on tefler make my day.
Jim lynch
2018-08-18 04:26:19 +0000 UTCWink wink
Forbsey
2018-08-18 03:23:49 +0000 UTCYou're not helping. :-|
Jedi Khan
2018-08-18 03:22:45 +0000 UTC17 hours!
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-18 03:20:45 +0000 UTCTefler, apparently, people like my semi-humorous post the other day, since I've never had so many likes before that I can recall - and I appreciate them - so I wanted to just say, if you liked any of it, you're welcome to use it or not as you wish.
Evan
2018-08-18 01:25:40 +0000 UTCMjk154, if you click on the ellipsis at the bottom of your post, you have the option to edit it. I thought you should be told. :-)
Evan
2018-08-18 01:23:10 +0000 UTCprivacy
Mjk154
2018-08-18 00:44:19 +0000 UTCrespect your pi
Mjk154
2018-08-18 00:43:48 +0000 UTCi respite
Mjk154
2018-08-18 00:38:22 +0000 UTCor book 2 with other cover i wouid love to your 1st edisions signed
Mjk154
2018-08-18 00:36:51 +0000 UTCTefler any word on a paper book 3 ? or a book signing ?
Mjk154
2018-08-18 00:25:27 +0000 UTCJFL maybe right Tefler tens to post before 12 am GMT
Mjk154
2018-08-18 00:15:19 +0000 UTCEven with his crisis of faith he is to much of a loyalist to try retiring in the middle of a war. Immediately after things calm down would be a different story.
Cody Strong
2018-08-17 23:24:41 +0000 UTCWhat’s 21 hours away?
ILRibrarian
2018-08-17 23:12:35 +0000 UTC21 hours and counting
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-17 22:50:08 +0000 UTCStop-loss - particularly in times of war aside, If Jack for example is having a crisis of faith he could be a liability to his ship, crew or brothers-in-arms and therefore any operation he is involved in. The responsible move is to keep his experience and knowledge but place him into positions where he can make the most impact without exposing him to tension. Border patrols, convoy escort, training all are possible. What I think is possible is Jack will get a dose of John, Calara and Alyssa and see the bigger picture and resolve any inner conflict we are currently projecting on him.... and yes there is mother Maria as well who might just sort out her man
TF4EVA
2018-08-17 22:17:00 +0000 UTCThey won't need a draft, just an official recruitment campaign. "Sign up! Defend the homeworld!" After all this shyte, people'll be raring to go.
Youkai-sama
2018-08-17 19:41:23 +0000 UTC@Chaucer - you are absolutely correct about stop-loss. In fact, they can also involuntarily extend someone who has enlisted for a set period of time (which is about to run out) too. I was in the USAF for almost 14 years and when I decided to get out 6yrs short of retirement to run our family business, I was denied outprocessing until the very last two weeks because of military operations that depended on my specialized knowledge. Believe me, @Beowulf, they can draft you in a war, and they can keep you during peace, too. In the scenario Tefler has created here, NOBODY is going as anywhere.. guaranteed. In fact, if they don't implement a draft, considering their losses during the battle of Terra, I would be very surprised!
CJ Mora
2018-08-17 18:57:23 +0000 UTCUnfortunately Beowulf, that's not how it works in our universe either. Stop-loss policies are around to prevent exactly this type of situation from happening when there is a need... and the T-Fed sure has the need right now. They can keep active duty from retiring and actually also recall former active duty personnel back to service. This article offers an in-depth look at it for US service members <a href="https://www.thebalancecareers.com/military-stop-loss-3345246" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.thebalancecareers.com/military-stop-loss-3345246</a>
2018-08-17 14:36:33 +0000 UTCJack's going to need to gain a few ranks in order to make that happen. He's what, Captain at the moment? He'll need to be at least Admiral rank to command an entire TFed fleet.
Jedi Khan
2018-08-17 06:43:12 +0000 UTCI am thinking Jack Fernandez and the boys will be in charge of the Terran Navy at John's new trade station. Maria could read her husband like a book and she could tell he was eating himself up with guilt for obeying orders and abandoning the Kirrix border. The invasion footage from the Outer Rim had been harrowing, with scenes of terrified colonists fighting for their very lives against the monstrous aliens. She knew that Jack must have seen it all as well and she longed to be at his side, comforting and reassuring him that he had no other choice. “Oh, Jack... I warned you this would happen,” she thought to herself with a melancholy sigh. “You were always too noble for the military... I knew you’d eventually be caught between your sense of duty and your principles.” She stroked his side of the bed, wishing he was home.
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-17 06:13:55 +0000 UTCSomeone's bored.
Jedi Khan
2018-08-17 03:23:32 +0000 UTC41 hours and counting
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-17 03:08:07 +0000 UTC45 hours and counting
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-16 23:04:34 +0000 UTCI don't 'Jones' I "Screwy Lewy"
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-16 23:02:48 +0000 UTCEnjoy spending time with your family Tefler. That is more important than our immediate gratification. We'd just be jonesing again tomorrow if you released the chapter today, so it doesn't change much!
2018-08-16 22:15:55 +0000 UTCSoon soon....
Ricardo Miguel Pereira da Silva
2018-08-16 20:29:15 +0000 UTCenjoy your time with loved ones
Mjk154
2018-08-16 19:49:43 +0000 UTCI'm still holding out for this afternoon or tonight so Tef isn't pushed to the last minute like he was last month. I know things have a way of filling all the available time. I just don't like to see him under so much stress.
2018-08-16 17:58:25 +0000 UTCT-50 hours and counting.
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-16 17:39:57 +0000 UTCThank you, good update.
2018-08-16 17:34:10 +0000 UTCThanks for the update
clauskj3r
2018-08-16 17:14:33 +0000 UTCThat's cool family is very important.
2018-08-16 17:08:53 +0000 UTCI'm still plugging away on 108 part 2, but I won't be finished with it today. I'm thinking the 18th is probably more realistic. Sorry for the delay, I've been catching up with some family time over the summer holidays.
Tefler
2018-08-16 17:02:58 +0000 UTCThank you.
Evan
2018-08-16 16:34:39 +0000 UTCOk I have a wild theory. What if Jade is a Archon. I went back to the videos of the creation and the Nymph's were not in it. What if M.K. enslaved some of them and changed them. Jade has Arhonin ruins on her heart. She might be one of the few he enslaved and the rest are just children of MK the few Nymphs he enslaved.
2018-08-16 16:21:36 +0000 UTCOK. Admittedly THAT was a great comment.
2018-08-16 13:41:37 +0000 UTCI don't mean to laugh, but I was thinking about the possibility of the Lionesses leading teams... and they have NO experience in doing so... Alyssa - "Just a moment." She stamps her foot and an ethereal wave washes over everyone. Suddenly, loud crunching sounds are heard from all over the ship as the Kirrix aboard the vessel suddenly find themselves crushed. Three of the soldiers seem to be glowing red, and Alyssa turns towards them, a frown starting to form upon her face... Jade - The marines look aghast at the rent and melted edges of the hole that she left behind her, trying to figure out how to follow after... Sakura - "This won't take long. Done. I'm going to the next ship, now." Dana - "Let's get th... oh, now that is interesti... oh, sparkly!" Rachel - As the giant Reaper Cannon floating above her head continually swivels, targeting and firing against any potential threat to Dana's girlfriend, Rachel says, "You don't need to be afraid. I'm here to help." Calara - Concentrating intently, she peels a banana and throws the peel ahead of the troops through an open door. A moment later, there is a huge crash, then another, then another, then another and another and.... "It's all in the wrist." I'll stop here. I'm laughing too hard.
Evan
2018-08-16 09:19:52 +0000 UTCThe team Jade leads would have some tales to tell afterwards!
Timbo
2018-08-16 06:26:31 +0000 UTCCan you imagine the girls each fighting like a Valkyrie with a Photon II laser cannon and pistols just clearing whole rooms of kirrix as the Marines jaws drop?
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-16 05:19:29 +0000 UTCForgive me if this has been discussed already. It has been a really hectic couple of weeks and I am way behind is reading through all the posts. I have a question and some thoughts about strategy for how the Kirrixx battle could go. I am assuming the Invictus crew will run some active scans once in range of the Kirrixx fleet. Now IF, the scans show that their are hostages already aboard the Kirrixx ships. Then boarding actions will be required. ( I really hope it goes this way ). Will John’s strategy be, to clear one ship at a time. And risk the Kirrixx killing the other hostages. Or will he split up and let each other the girls lead a group of Terran marines to hit more ships simultaneously. Wouldn’t it be awsome to see Alyssa, Sakura, Tashana and Irillith. Get some center stage spotlight time as they blast their way spearheading the charge through the bug ranks to save helpless, hopeless captives. What an efficient, effective way to bring as much force as possible to bear. Plus gain even more notoriety for the girls.
MJHSharkbait365
2018-08-16 01:39:06 +0000 UTCI'll put my hand up and admit that until you raised it I had forgotten. Wasn't Commander Richards who was interviewed and gave the snappy reply? Nice how people we have seen in the past are being rewoven into the story i.e Capt Flintlock and Commander Richards...
TF4EVA
2018-08-15 20:00:07 +0000 UTCOK guys, here’s a prediction on the appearance time for Ch 108. 11:30 pm UK time on the 17th......
Timbo
2018-08-15 17:57:33 +0000 UTCWookey, where are you? we're counting on you to count for us!
2018-08-15 13:29:42 +0000 UTCThe chapter is going to be late.Wookey didn't do a countdown.It's always late when he doesn't do a countdown.
Braw
2018-08-15 13:19:38 +0000 UTCHoly crap, I can't believe I've forgotten. Has anyone wondered what happened to the people who got into a spaceship to 'meet' the Kirrix? I'm looking at you Tefler, you thought we forgot :) Maybe they got to Arcadia? I mean the Kirrix are swarming to Federation and Trankaran territory.
Forbsey
2018-08-15 12:56:47 +0000 UTCLooking forward to getting some of the answers (maybe) in the next couple of days.
TF4EVA
2018-08-15 09:06:07 +0000 UTCTefler, I think I mentioned this one before, but when Dana says "we’re going to have to work our ass off" - that should be plural. We and our followed by asses, not we and our followed by ass, singular.
Evan
2018-08-15 04:35:48 +0000 UTCNot necessarily. If he was injured badly enough, he might not have been in any shape to come for her, particularly since he had cut himself off from his own Thralls thus removing that source of psychic energy that he could have used for healing. By releasing Valada, he not only saved her, he also released the Maliri so that they could be later claimed by John. Or perhaps, he released the Maliri to John when John was born, unbeknownst to John? Who knows? Oh yes, OTK!
Evan
2018-08-15 04:33:04 +0000 UTCI do not believe that the Progenitor that John's mother found on Acadia is Larn'kelnar for the very simple reason that his Matriarch has been his Matriarch for several thousand years. If she was with him on Acadia, and that ship was crashed there some 10K years ago, then she would have been his Matriarch for far longer. Also, why would he still have been on Acadia?
Evan
2018-08-15 04:29:25 +0000 UTCWe have to assume, given MN's affection for Valada and the lengths he was prepared to go to keep her safe, that if he survived, he would have come back for her, and perhaps the nymphs, and headed for the far reaches of the universe with them.
2018-08-15 04:12:03 +0000 UTCit would explain LK's instructions to not harm John
2018-08-15 04:05:58 +0000 UTCRanagon is the name that the Trankarans gave to the second progenitor, it sounds nothing like MN or LK. What if Ranagon=LK, and the family reunion includes John's mother??
2018-08-15 04:04:27 +0000 UTCand we still have the question of what and or who is on Acadia?
TF4EVA
2018-08-14 21:37:42 +0000 UTCIf one of the secondary weapons of a Progenitor vessel is a Quantum Flux Cannon sufficient to induce quantum flux within its target (and ignoring conventional shielding, insofar as we can discern) and sufficiently destructive to destroy worlds all on its own, then what might the primary weapons of a Progenitor vessel be? Now, having decided upon the awesome power of a Progenitor vessel's primary weapon, keep in mind that the armour of a Progenitor vessel is such that Mael'nerak knew that even the primary weapons of his vessel would not be sufficient to destroy Ranagon's vessel, thus necessitating the self-sacrificing manoeuvre that resulted in rifts in space-time that destroyed an entire solar system and rendered it extremely dangerous even to this day 10,000 years later. Now, finally, keep in mind that insofar as we know, the majority of both ships SURVIVED that catastrophic event!!! How the (expletives deleted) tough and resilient must that armour be? Compared to that, 15 times shaped Crystal Alyssium may be as resistant as matches in the corona of a star are to heat! Dana is not even close to being able to replicate that capability, especially without a Soul Forge. Given this, I still don't see why anyone thinks that John is going to be fighting Larn'kelnar in a ship to ship battle aboard the Invictus. If Larn'kelnar had at *any* time wanted to rid himself of John, he could have done so as easily as blinking. Instead, he has gone to some trouble to ensure that John survives. Folks, I just don't see Larn'kelnar being John's enemy, on the face of things, given what he has demonstrably been able to do. Larn'kelnar has also demonstrated that he knows where John is at almost all times, so it's not like he can't find him and kill him at any time he wishes. The one thing that he hasn't been able to determine is why John is doing what he's doing, although he's starting to get an inkling. The real question is not how will John 'match the power of the BSP'... or as we now know him, Larn'kelnar. The real question is simply what is Larn'kelnar doing, why, and how does it relate to John? Everything else is meaningless as I see it, because John is not going to 'match' Larn'kelnar's powers and resources within any short period of time, meaning years. At some point, John's got to start asking these questions himself. He doesn't know that he's being watched, but he certainly knows about Mael'nerak's fight with Ranagon, and the power of the secondary weapons aboard the Progenitors' vessels, and that they are secondary weapons, and the destruction that Mael'nerak caused, and the fact that the Legacy survived it largely intact. John or Calara should also certainly know that the notion of coincidence is faulty, and that they've had enough encounters where they've seen the Progenitor's ship to understand that he's seen them as well and could have easily destroyed them. So, the questions then become, why hasn't he? Why doesn't he? What's going on? If John isn't asking these questions, Calara and/or Rachel and/or Alyssa should be. Edraele, Irilith and Tashana should be, too. There are too many smart, perceptive and untrusting personalities involved for this not to be the case. They might not know the answers any more than we do, but they too should be asking the questions.
Evan
2018-08-14 19:27:38 +0000 UTCMichael, no, we won't. If you look, the ones we get charged for state: 'Paid for by patrons' and this one is simply: 'Patrons only' so there won't be any additional charge for the combined chapter.
Evan
2018-08-14 11:42:02 +0000 UTCi noticed we got charged for both parts of chapter 107 or at least i did are we gona get charged for it again?
Michael
2018-08-14 11:04:06 +0000 UTCmikecfl send me a private message
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-14 04:54:00 +0000 UTCIn terms of pushing the Kirrix back into their own space... I haven't seen any evidence that the Kirrix retreat, so it's not a matter of pushing them back, but exterminating them within the confines of the space within which you wish to remove them, and eliminating enough of them outside of that area so that they don't re-infest the area that you're trying to protect. Having protected boundaries seems to the only deterrent that has worked, so far, with the Kirrix. Or am I missing something?
Evan
2018-08-14 01:57:17 +0000 UTCNext step is the Kirrix for John and the Invictus. 'tomorrow' he will meet with the terran fleet and during that time the final refit of the invictus tachyon lances will be completed. What do you think the order of battle will be in terms of command and communication structure - both in the air and on the ground. What do you think the strategy let alone the tactics will be for reclaiming the worlds, deinfesting and pushing Kirrix back into their own space? These will obviously influence the deployment of the avaioable resources
TF4EVA
2018-08-14 00:43:53 +0000 UTCI thought you had many pleasant and pleasing surprises for us in this chapter. When I finished it there was a big smile on my face and laughter in my heart. Absolutely a great chapter!
2018-08-13 20:10:36 +0000 UTChe he JFL. I think you are right, at some stage Lynette and Jehanna will use their gifts but whether it is Mace or not we will just have to wait and see. To keep the story relatively clean I suspect Mace and his sister will learn the truth about their dad and somehow healing will begin.
TF4EVA
2018-08-13 11:44:03 +0000 UTCAnother observation: Adm (RET) Bucky's son is going to be granted berevement leave and he is going to get some of the Admirals who ran away from Alyssa and John and go to Fleet Admiral D and try to kill her. But the shield generators and Gatling Laser power level pistols she and Jahenna are sporting are going to give them a rather rude surprise. I am thinking the insurgents will commandeer the Defensive Gatling Laser emplacements in the entrances to the officers' quarters and our two secret lionesses will just walk through and melt them off their mounts while everyone else just gapes in wonder. John is going to be....what is the word? PISSED!
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-13 07:04:28 +0000 UTCLove it JFL and I'm sure this will invite alot of comment until we sort of agree on the ideal strike force for comparison in later chapters. What role for the Valkyrie? I imagine it would get beneath hard shields and wreck havoc although I think you are suggesting tachyon lances would be enough to rip shields so the valkyrie is only needed as part of ground operations. Where does the quantum flux cannon fit into the armament for the invictus?
TF4EVA
2018-08-12 21:16:46 +0000 UTCOk...here is where I think the tech goes. They figure out the soul forge location only to realize it uses up thrall lives. Dana gets innovative with it and they create white ships in the Cruiser class with other advancements and combinations from Dana on the Progen and other race's techs which may include dark energy weaponry (similar to matter/antimatter but at the energy phase not the matter phase). Said weapons not only can dematerialize matter but also energy shields and energy beams. It does this through the application of repulsive gravity that just causes the atomic and sub-atomic structures to be repelled in their smallest possible states...dispursing matter and energy into non-coherent forms...like the phasers did on Star Trek. The new Cruiser class gunships (16) are more resilient than Progen flagships, more maneuverable than the Raptor, and serve as picket vessels for the Invictus with minimalist Maliri crews of 1 pilot, 2 gunners, one Captain...but have three complete crews that take shifts with the off duty shifts housed on the Invictus. All the gunship crews are prescient and are tied into a psychic battle subplane and the gunners never miss. And, equip every advanced Miliri fighter with quad, gimbal mounted Tachyon Lances, Progen power cores/regulators/hard shields/zero point regulators and hive mind capability. They should fly in a 7 member flock in an Octohedron formation with a centralized fighter (below) with the center ship moving the whole flock and providing the firing solutions/commands and shielding the group. When its shields are weakened it trades places with one of the other 7 fighters who then takes up those responsibilities. That gives the squadron a minimum of 16 tachyon lances to focus on a target or 28 total with near unlimited survivability. The Ashanath pour psychic energy into the Soul Forge to make them by hooking in through Alyssa's subplane. Nearly the entire population working in concert with psychic enhancers....producing ship parts and skeletons for their and the Maliri's new fleets. Fill the cargo bay with the new Maliri Fighter Squadrons and one third of the off duty Maliri cross train on them so they can be used in a larger firefight.
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-12 20:41:28 +0000 UTCThanks Tef! How are e books selling? Great I hope. Your up dates are always greatly appreciated.
2018-08-12 17:09:53 +0000 UTCAh, well spotted, thank you!
Tefler
2018-08-12 15:54:08 +0000 UTCif this hasn't been pointed out yet. “They better get cracking then!” Avery roared at the shocked young man. (He)His glowered at him and added. “What’re you still doing here? Get moving!”
2018-08-12 15:47:36 +0000 UTCand that was even before Alyssa told her secret. The Great Maker is a clever writer
TF4EVA
2018-08-12 12:05:10 +0000 UTCHehe I like it, it's taking a page out of Jean Johnson's "Theirs Not To Reason Why". Another thing to do is lay down fire on an approaching fleet while they are still traveling at FTL, of course this assumes that a ship is not "out of phase" so to speak while at FTL.
2018-08-12 08:22:01 +0000 UTCin re-reading I found a little hint we all missed about Aylssa's surprise at the end , when Alyssa asked Edraele for some advice on if John would like her surprise , she answered "I'm all ears" , dang that Tefler is a sneaky dude .
bigdawguw65
2018-08-12 07:54:21 +0000 UTCThank you for the update. Have you found a new artist yet?
Nibbles
2018-08-12 06:43:08 +0000 UTCThanks Tefler. The status updates are really helpful - we addicts are longing for the fixes - but having an educated idea when we can realistically get get the next fix makes a real positive difference - thanks for that.
Kim Biel-Nielsen
2018-08-12 06:09:21 +0000 UTCAwesome sauce
Alarinnise
2018-08-12 05:43:51 +0000 UTCThanks Tefler!!!
Anthony Kester
2018-08-12 04:44:44 +0000 UTCI'm still waiting for Calara to use the Singularity Drivers to shell an unsuspecting hostile fleet from beyond sensor range, like the next star system over. The Singularity Drivers fire solid chunks of metal at FTL speeds, and with Calara's abilities, she can predict where a hostile fleet will be at a certain time, and since the laws of physics dictate that an object will continue to move until acted on by another force, she should be able to aim the Singularity Drivers in such a way that the shells will reach the target point at the same time as the unsuspecting fleet does. With the enemy fleet caught completely off guard and shields down, Calara should be able to score dozens of hits with a rapid fire volley from the Singularity Drivers before the target ships can react.
Jedi Khan
2018-08-12 04:20:56 +0000 UTCWith regards to the third item, the Singularity Drivers are already FTL weapons, launching a solid chunk of metal at FTL speeds. So really, I don't imagine anything will change tactically, aside from being able to kill enemy ships faster with the new Tachyon Lances. For the fourth item, it might be possible that Vulkat missile tech is somehow able to bypass hardened shields that normal missiles can't, but it could also be that the Vulkat were simply able to overwhelm the Thrall shield tech with massed missile volleys, knocking the shields out before scoring hits against the hull.
Jedi Khan
2018-08-12 03:50:39 +0000 UTCWell, I am curious about a few things. First: the slow transformation of the Bots into entities with personality. Second: the transmutation of Faye to a real girl. Third: the new Tachyon weapons, if truly tachyon, cannot travel less that the speed of light...so you have ftl weapons....how does that change tactics? Fourth: The Vulkat image shows scores of mini Torpedo hits on a thrall vessel...which has a solid state shield. Does this mean the Vulkat mini missiles can penetrate a solid state shield???
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-12 03:48:08 +0000 UTCActually Cignal...that is correct. The two hours was with the current number of bots. Which Faye is doubling. So the time would be an hour with the new bots.
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-08-12 03:20:22 +0000 UTCAlso I don't know if Admiral Kesters first name is Andrew or not but on page 57, it states “Andrew Kester sends his regards,” Eleanor said, with a smile. Just checking.
Cignal
2018-08-12 02:25:43 +0000 UTCTefler on page 4, Faye says it will take her boys 126 minutes to swap out the Tachyon Lances out, Faye piped up. “Assuming you make the weapon mounts on the Tachyon Lances compatible with our existing turrets, it’ll take my boys 126 minutes to swap them all out." then in the next paragraph, John states it will only take an hour. "“So we’ll only need an hour for the refit,” John said". One or the other should change as 126 minutes is over two hours.
Cignal
2018-08-12 02:20:20 +0000 UTC