Status Update - Chapter 102
Added 2018-04-19 23:38:41 +0000 UTCHey everyone,
I've just completed part 1 of chapter 102 and sent it over to my editors. I'll continue working on part 2 over the next several days and aim to get it completed by about the 25th April.
Thank you to all the people who've been buying copies of the eBooks! I've received a bunch of edits, so I'll try and pencil in some time to go through those, then updated the version on amazon.
I'm in a bit of a quandry about what to do for the next bit of artwork. I've spoken to the artist that did the banner art, but he wants $1200 to do a commission of the Raptor... I've still got lots of individual portraits to do of the cast, but after the award ceremony commission, I'm not sure about using that same guy again. Please let me know if you've seen any great artists that might be suitable to work on ships or portraits of the girls!
After chapter 102 is completed, I might make a start on with eBook 4. I'll have to see what stage of the story I'm up to when I finish part 2. :-)
Cheers
Tefler
Comments
Maybe John and LK are brothers
2018-05-01 02:47:36 +0000 UTCThat is what I think, too.
2018-05-01 02:45:43 +0000 UTCUsually Tefler will post an update if he is not going to post on the expected day. Maybe he just fell asleep at his computer before pressing enter to upload the story.....lets just wait till he wakes up to go pee........lol
2018-04-26 01:14:47 +0000 UTCi AGREE tONY
2018-04-26 01:09:25 +0000 UTCNope, but wait we will.....
Tony Bates
2018-04-26 01:00:18 +0000 UTCWell, it's about 2am Tefler's time. He has posted as late as 2:30-3am, so he has about another 30 minutes to an hour. Let's wait and see what happens.
Jedi Khan
2018-04-26 00:59:31 +0000 UTCFolks, just remember, the 25th was an estimate. If Tefler is still working to finish the chapter and make it better, then we can all wait patiently! Yes?
Evan
2018-04-26 00:56:45 +0000 UTCTefler is in England - there it's already the 26th.
2018-04-26 00:55:56 +0000 UTCStill hope in US CDT
2018-04-26 00:55:01 +0000 UTCMaybe not for tefler
2018-04-26 00:52:32 +0000 UTCSigh the 25th came and went - F5 - F5 - F5
Kim Biel-Nielsen
2018-04-26 00:32:24 +0000 UTCMake a mini assembly line to assemble more "boys" for Faye...or maybe the cleaning bots will take over the line to assemble upgraded versions of themselves!
Frostfyre
2018-04-26 00:22:19 +0000 UTCThey’ve already seen that from Nexus, so that won’t be new either. But it’s a basic design that Dana can upgrade the hell out of without having to wait for the ship to be built itself.
DemonHunterCole
2018-04-26 00:01:43 +0000 UTCTFed ripped out all the electronics. Nothing left to store data. :(
Donovan Gibson
2018-04-25 23:42:53 +0000 UTCIt’s his mom. The other proginator was talking about a family reunion.
2018-04-25 23:36:51 +0000 UTCI doubt that it’s the gun, simply because of the emotions felt when it was touched. They don’t seem appropriate for a weapon that was on the outside of the vessel... but it could be. I look forward to finding out. :-)
Evan
2018-04-25 23:29:01 +0000 UTCRobert, the pod might not be that old... and could be from 10,000 years ago... isn’t spacetime a wondrous thing? Wormholes bridge spacetime... no? :-)
Evan
2018-04-25 23:26:38 +0000 UTCMy bet is on the gun.
LunarLilith
2018-04-25 23:26:00 +0000 UTCPost?
Muledrvr
2018-04-25 23:22:58 +0000 UTCNope. It’s the Legacy gun....
Timbo
2018-04-25 23:22:44 +0000 UTCSo, now that we’re approaching the release point, does anyone else think that the Progenitor shell that penetrated the Ashanath vessel contains life? I’m curious as to whether or not my suspicion will turn out to be true.
Evan
2018-04-25 23:19:55 +0000 UTCData lag?
DemonHunterCole
2018-04-25 23:16:57 +0000 UTCJust checking to see if the site was up...lol
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-04-25 23:09:21 +0000 UTCData jack?
Muledrvr
2018-04-25 23:00:02 +0000 UTCData Check
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-04-25 22:58:53 +0000 UTCHave you tried posting an ad at a college or university? There should be a way to get some up and coming artist pulled into your world.
oldman64
2018-04-25 19:29:48 +0000 UTCReference artists
oldman64
2018-04-25 19:16:24 +0000 UTCAs for the disappointing work done by the ceremony artist, have you contacted them to express said disappointment? I mean, if I was them I would appreciate the chance to correct the commission before you slipped my name to your 3000+ followers. Yeah, you’ll have to spend some more time talking to them, but they shouldn’t charge you another penny.
DemonHunterCole
2018-04-25 18:46:06 +0000 UTCETA 4 hours 23 minutes.
DemonHunterCole
2018-04-25 18:37:59 +0000 UTCIt probably will be out at midnight GMT which is about 6 hours from now.
2018-04-25 17:03:33 +0000 UTCCounting down the hu0ours huh? Wonder if it's a ego boost that we all want it now not in 10 hours! Lol
Sithy
2018-04-25 16:44:53 +0000 UTCTefler commented 20 hrs ago and said tommorow evening release i am guessing he posted the comment maybe around noon so lets assume he'd need 30-36 hours to post it so atleast 10 more hours to go
2018-04-25 13:43:06 +0000 UTCNope it will probably be the 26th where you are. It's 14:44 here and I doubt will see it posted until late tonight or tomorrow morning.
Nibbles
2018-04-25 11:43:50 +0000 UTCIt's 7AM, I think it's a little early.
Sindre Bjørnhjell
2018-04-25 05:40:09 +0000 UTCIs it time yet?!
2018-04-25 04:46:51 +0000 UTCI reread the series to date waiting for 102. I'm still surprised how strong the series started for a new writer, and how it just keeps getting better.
2018-04-25 01:56:22 +0000 UTCYay! Can’t wait! So addicting!
David B
2018-04-24 21:13:10 +0000 UTCAwesome!
2018-04-24 17:57:01 +0000 UTCI've written 25k so far, so I'm on track for an evening release tomorrow (25th).
Tefler
2018-04-24 17:18:16 +0000 UTCTomorrow is 25th April.. any update by when we can expect chapter 102 ??
2018-04-24 17:12:22 +0000 UTCCan't wait!
2018-04-24 16:01:57 +0000 UTCOoooh now that's art. Don't know why but the others just reminded me of a video game. That can be good but it just doesn't feel right here for some reason.
Dennis Aston
2018-04-23 19:48:38 +0000 UTCWhat about a dragon fly... See what I did there?
Grimlakin
2018-04-23 19:13:00 +0000 UTCCompletely off topic here, but i just had a thought. If Jade can increase her mass to become a dragon, could she decrease it to the size of a fly, so she can spy easily?
2018-04-23 16:31:41 +0000 UTCTimbo, I agree Euderion is good but I lean toward colourbrand for ships and haneto for character art? IMHO
2018-04-23 13:53:14 +0000 UTCIt already is... check under the commissioned art work tab to find the post
2018-04-23 13:35:22 +0000 UTCWill the cover art for the third ebook be made available on patreon?
2018-04-23 13:24:43 +0000 UTCTef, if you manage to get lucky enough to have a shortlist of potential replacment artists, the good ol’ voting thing on here could be a good way of de-risking the decison process a little. The listing above has some good stuff in it - I think I would vote Euderion followed by Jack Felix (or maybe a dead heat... ) so far.....
Timbo
2018-04-23 11:40:27 +0000 UTC<a href="https://colourbrand.deviantart.com" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://colourbrand.deviantart.com</a> , <a href="https://euderion.deviantart.com" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://euderion.deviantart.com</a> , <a href="https://belvane.deviantart.com" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://belvane.deviantart.com</a> , <a href="https://haneto.deviantart.com" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://haneto.deviantart.com</a> , <a href="https://elianeck.deviantart.com" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://elianeck.deviantart.com</a>
Servo1969
2018-04-23 00:29:58 +0000 UTCHere are some artists-
Servo1969
2018-04-22 23:48:55 +0000 UTCA lot of people have been saying the same things, so I wasn't the only one thinking that!
Iori Daemona Angel
2018-04-21 21:27:34 +0000 UTCThe award ceremony image was a rip off. Copy paste of a pose and then a hue-adjustment for Jade and Sparks. to make them look different. I would not use that guy again. Keep your money in your pocket until you find someone better.
Hinterlands Man
2018-04-21 14:06:36 +0000 UTCSpeaking of cosplayer, i envisage Alyssa as looking like katopunk from Instagram who is a major steampunk cosplayer and designer. The other girls would be a variation on the theme of course. Just my two bobs worth. Great story Tefler, keep it up.
2018-04-21 04:43:24 +0000 UTCAssuming that it's the same guy as the award ceremony, you're not getting your money's worth.
ZeroCross
2018-04-21 02:33:17 +0000 UTCTefler, why not reach out to some international cosplayer and see if you could arrange an actual model in that way. Many would be glad to fabricate something to fit your vision for the body armor and such. Not sure if the cost would be a savings or not. But 1200 seems steep currently. When you're making millions in royalties that's a different story.
Grimlakin
2018-04-20 22:16:13 +0000 UTCHeya Tefler, this is the artist I used for my own art cover : <a href="https://jackiefelixart.deviantart.com/" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://jackiefelixart.deviantart.com/</a>
Iori Daemona Angel
2018-04-20 20:33:07 +0000 UTCJedi, mine is the 27th.
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-04-20 17:04:37 +0000 UTCThanks for the update Tefler. Glad to hear that 102 will be out around the 25th, just in time for my birthday! As for the artists...how much did the guy who did the banner art charge you last time? $1200 seems to be much higher than before. Now if he's doing a lot of work for that $1200, then it might be worth it. Depends on how much he has to do. With regards to the portraits of the girls, how about the artist who did Irillith and Tashana? That was a pretty good piece.
Jedi Khan
2018-04-20 10:12:51 +0000 UTCWhat type of style are you looking for for the commissions? Do you want obviously not real all the way up to photo-realistic?
George41
2018-04-20 10:10:36 +0000 UTCDefinitely not worth the money from the art seen so far - I'd find a new guy.
Singh
2018-04-20 07:56:29 +0000 UTCBelieve it or not it’s that guy who did the award ceremony. I’d now describe him as can be good, but rather flakey... Maybe the Fool’s Gold work was in the nature of trying to set a hook...
Timbo
2018-04-20 07:36:47 +0000 UTCIm currently working on book one of a series of a mythological adventure in ancient ireland and artwork will be a central part of the package. Stuck on whether to take time to draw myself or find an artist. Might be worth the time to learn how to do it myself. I can draw but would need to learn illustration
2018-04-20 06:24:39 +0000 UTCFind a new guy
2018-04-20 06:13:51 +0000 UTCThanks.
morris ridgeway
2018-04-20 03:43:58 +0000 UTCMark, I like those. Boobs are a bit big but they were well done. (the pics...lol)
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2018-04-20 03:01:17 +0000 UTCNot a big fan of the 3D artwork but prefer more exaggerated comic book art but these two blondes are what I picture Alyssa and the girls look like: <a href="https://king-of-tha-dome.deviantart.com/art/Blonde-Gladiator-736661480" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://king-of-tha-dome.deviantart.com/art/Blonde-Gladiator-736661480</a>and here she is at Oceanus <a href="https://king-of-tha-dome.deviantart.com/art/Barely-There-682875886" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://king-of-tha-dome.deviantart.com/art/Barely-There-682875886</a> . Links are 3D nudity so be careful browsing at work.
Mark P
2018-04-20 02:18:17 +0000 UTCI read for the writing, not the art.
Walter Henderson
2018-04-20 02:10:52 +0000 UTCHey Tefler, as far as I'm concerned the art has all been fine. Of course it doesn't match up with the images of people and ships your writing has inspired in my mind, I don't think that is a realistic expectation though. Just pick the artists you feel do the best job of bringing the TSM universe to life. I would like to see a fully rendered 3D galactic empire map soon though.
2018-04-20 01:42:08 +0000 UTCHey Tefler, I got a guy that's really good. I already made this community post about him awhile back: <a href="https://www.patreon.com/posts/17569691">https://www.patreon.com/posts/17569691</a> I like him because he keeps things vivid yet abstract, which is useful when people already have their preconceived notions of what things in the story look like.
2018-04-20 01:26:03 +0000 UTCcheck out this guy <a href="https://felixffds.deviantart.com" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://felixffds.deviantart.com</a> he does some really good portraits for another story I read
Wozza
2018-04-20 01:09:07 +0000 UTCTefler,
2018-04-20 01:07:43 +0000 UTCI, for one, am in it for this incredible story. There has to be someone who is a fan who could do you justice on the team and Raptor for a lot less or even the privilege of just being a part of this. I would do it for nothing if I had any talent, but I cannot even do stick figures right. Good luck with your search!!!!
Arrowglass
2018-04-20 00:48:54 +0000 UTCThere's a guy on DeviantArt called skinnii3D (<a href="https://skinnii3d.deviantart.com/gallery/)" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://skinnii3d.deviantart.com/gallery/)</a> who's done some great character work for another author I support here. He gets faces right, which is pretty tricky. I think he'd do a great job on the girls.
David Kepler
2018-04-20 00:40:34 +0000 UTCThanks for the up date . Have to agree that's a pretty steep price & as much as I enjoy the art I think you could find an artist willing to work with you to get there work seen by all your fans .
bigdawguw65
2018-04-20 00:00:35 +0000 UTCHearing the prices you've quoted for the artwork makes me wish I was still doing CGI. His work is decent but $1200 sounds like you're being taken for a ride. Truth is I'm waiting for the story Tefler, as much as I'd like to see the Raptor it can wait until you find a reasonably priced artist
2018-04-19 23:57:41 +0000 UTCIf you can get me a rough 3-view sketch of the Raptor, I can CAD it up and 3D Print it and do some photoshopping of it to give it a background, engine flares and bullet traces. Thanks for the update on 102! I'm looking forward to see how this new influx of characters works out on the Invictus. It must be getting crowded by now! Then again, I suppose Mael'Nerak had several thousand Maliri on the 'Legacy'... But the Invictus is quite a bit smaller than that!
Donovan Gibson
2018-04-19 23:53:55 +0000 UTCYeah, that seems steep. He up his prices? I'd shop around. Consistency is good but not if you're being blackmailed. Also, has the artist read your work? They get excited enough they might do it for free!
Roethan
2018-04-19 23:52:50 +0000 UTCIs the artist who did the image of Alyssa on the Fools Gold available? That one was pretty awesome.
2018-04-19 23:50:18 +0000 UTCThanks keep up the great work!
2018-04-19 23:46:25 +0000 UTCUse someone different for the pictures. Check out deviant art site and see if someone there would he better
Scott Way
2018-04-19 23:43:06 +0000 UTCT Y Tefler
Mjk154
2018-04-19 23:41:54 +0000 UTCThanks tefler looking forward to 102
wildcat 1986
2018-04-19 23:41:45 +0000 UTC