Chapter 81 Status update

When BSP will come with his army, I don't think he will care about his past allies here, it could well be an alliance ( maybe expect Kirrix ) of everybody against BSP. Of Course convincing some of this now hostile races would be a challenge...

Could be. Or it could just be a one-on-one show down with the BSP, with the other races none the wiser as to it having happened. We simply don't know what Tefler has planned in that devious, brilliant mind of his.

Jedi Khan

Isn't it more likely that the final battle will be an alliance of the Invictus with the Terran Federation, the Ashanath, the Trankarans, and the Maliri, against the other Progenitor leading the Drakkar, Kintark, Kirrix(?), plus (perhaps) assorted pirates and mercenaries? Still undetermined is where the Brimorians will fall.

Xd yes if I remember right I think he was paid in food

Mark Hall

I'd say fairly low, actually. Sure, John might be fine with the idea of Tashana having a Drakkar on her crew, maybe even marvel at the fact she was able to keep him in line, but the Drakkar are really high maintenance and don't play well with each other, let alone other races. Not to mention the fact that the Ashanath are terrified of the Drakkar and the Drakkar view the Ashanath as a delicacy; there's little chance either race would accept the other as an ally, and trying to make that chance happen, let alone maintaining that shaky alliance, is an effort John likely won't want to take on. John might be able to find a few individual Drakkar that he can work with and keep in line, as a sort of hired muscle like Groluk was for Tashana, but the race as a whole? Not likely without some serious work, like genetically reprogramming the whole race sort of work.

Jedi Khan

Before new chapter arrives, what are the chances of John taking control of Drakkar ? Because personally I think they are high, especially after he talks to Alyssa about what she saw in Tashanas memories with this Drakkar guy being one of her crew.

I was just thinking that myself.

Byroz

The anticipation is killing me

Mark Hall

This post needs a time stamp damnit!!

Grimlakin

I'm up to 30k words at the moment. I'll take a break for a couple of hours, then I'll finish the final scene. You can probably expect it up on the site in around 4 hours or so. :-)

Tefler

Ok Its Tuesday? Where is chapter 81... Big question is will this be the full chapter with grammar and spelling mistakes. Or will you add more to it over the next couple days like with 80?

OK, So I need my Fix, I have been up since 4, checking this site and looking @ my email every 15 mins waiting for the announcement that Tefler posted "Chapter 81". I am sure that more content is being added and more will be added over the coming days to chapter 81 just like chapter 80. I have read chapter 80 four times, three in the various stages from here and then again on Literotica yesterday!!! I need my Fix, Wishing you super speed fingers and a clear head. All of this is said with the greatest respect to the Author. Knowing how hard it is to create, I am a technical writer for the computer world. One of my Great Lines that I tell everyone that criticizes my work - "The world is full of critics, very few can create!" And you Create Wonderful works!

Master Laurent

Is today the day?

Master Laurent

Tis here in Oz,

is it Tuesday yet?

We need more updates...

I'm wondering when Faye's programmed desires to protect her crew will lead her to the conclusion that the best way to protect them when they leave the confines of the Invictus is to not have them leave the confines of the Invictus... and since that would harm them, mentally and emotionally, to be confined, to thus determine that they should remain within the confines of the Invictus while believing that they're not so confined... and thus, the Matrix was created, out of a love and a desire to protect those she cares for... Or, she's going to require a more mobile avatar capable of interacting with the physical world and able to protect them on their adventures outside the confines of the Invictus....

Evan

Thx Tefler I Cannot wait looking forward to another great Chapter.

Hey Ben......Chapter 80 is finalized.... ;-)

PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.

Can't wait! Does this mean chapter 80 is finalized? Aaaannnndddd nevermind! Just noticed there is a final notification...lol

Ah, very nice. five character first post, then edited in the rest later. Bravo! :-)

Tefler

I'm like the Alyssa of Patreon!

Tefler

Such a tease Tefler

Wookey

I'll be honest I hurried to get first. ;)

Grimlakin

Dam it second again lol

Jim lynch

Can't wait!

Great

Jim lynch

Woop! Glad to see that... And teasing over a few chapters huh. Will be interesting to see what that is. With John now the defacto military ruler of one star empire, and having put another into protectorate status, the tfed have got to have received word on what is going on. I wonder if they expect John to try and take control, and how they feel about that.

Grimlakin