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Three Square Meals Ch 65

Chapter 65 is finally done!

Apologies for the slightly longer wait for this one. It's a bit longer than normal as there was a lot I wanted to cover. Looking forward to hearing what you think of it!

Tefler

Comments

I wonder if Dana would be able to look at the plasma and singularity blueprints. Rachel gets her DNA samples.

Dwight Brown

I'm glad you guys all enjoyed it!

Tefler

Great Chapter!

Dwight Brown

Great chapter! Thanks!

Akamai Kekoa

Thanks Cameron, I'm glad you've been enjoying it. I hadn't planned on posting chapters 1-58, as they're already on literotica or storiesonline.

Tefler

I hope someday we can visit Jade's home planet. I'm curious to know if anyone is left or is it in ruin. I thought way back in the early chapters that it might become their home, but girls of another color might have a different idea.

DCM

When "Alyssa" showed up that sort of brought everyone together. grin

DCM

I was a bit reluctant to start posting pics of how I imagined the girls would look, as everyone has their own very distinctive ideas. I'm always interested to see alternative suggestions! :)

Tefler

I checked the girl's pictures after reading this Chapter. I had to wonder at Rachel blasting away on an elevated Kintark. But Dana, oh, that one is perfect. Well, heck, they are all perfect!

DCM

Hey tefler I love your story and I can't wait to see what happens when john and his rescue team encounter the kintark enthraller On a side note: I'm curious if you are going to post chapters 1 - 58 on patron, if all goes according to your plans of course

It is a huge story. You just can't put a whole story-arc into one chapter. Cliffhangers are not avoidable . So stop screaming and enjoy...

Nekronom

I think I verbally assaulted you at the end of 60 pt 1... then checked every day until the you posted the whole chapter. Thanks for all the hard work Tefler, it's appreciated!

Tony Bates

I think I'll struggle to top the Chapter 60 part 1 cliffhanger with Jade dead, and John dragged away! There's so much going on now, that I often end the chapter at what I think is a decent stopping point, and people groan at the cliffhanger!

Tefler

One of these days, Tef, you're going to let the story carry you away and you'll write a chapter to it's natural conclusion without a cliffhanger. However, as far as cliffhangers go, this one is pretty tame. You could have been truly evil and ended the chapter on a scene with one of the huge dragons having one of the girls pinned under its claws, or caught in its jaws, and the mighty paragon armor beginning to crack under the pressure. Now that would be a cliffhanger.

Jedi Khan

Sorry about the cliffhanger on this one. :) I had to stop it somewhere or I would have kept on going for another several thousand words to wrap up events on Xen-Nuchek. I'll do my best to get chapter 66 out for you before xmas!

Tefler

The chapter was awesome but I really hate cliff hangers

Mark Hall

Oh you fucking brilliant bastard....... Here I am reading along enjoying the story when WHAMMO!!!!!!!!!! Right off the cliff........ Dammit!!!!!! LOL I hope you are able to right over the next few days.... We need a X-mas present..... LOL

Muledrvr

Another fantastic chapter in a fantastic series. I can't wait to see what happens! Now to very impatiently wait for the next chapter!

Anonamoose

The cliffhanger though. Urgh. Now the wait. Phew.

Tef, Have I ever said I hate cliffhangers. Great chapter. Love being on the early bird list and yes I get a Email when you post to Patreon.

Great chapter!

Chris Bridgeman

Here lies Spesh, who died waiting the extra long time. qq. Okay so I have been writing too and I found it can get more difficult when the holidays arrive. Now.. to read!!!

Hinterlands Man

Yeah, I got email at 1155 Pac time. Either it is automatic, or is an option in our individual accounts.

Muledrvr

I got the email notification at 1455 EST. The bad part is that I waited 2 weeks for it and now, four hours later, in spite of all I could do to slow it down, I am waiting on chapter 66.

I do. I think there are setting to turn that on and off.

Anthony Kester

Tef, I get an email when you post anything. So I got that going for me, which is nice.

I seem to be having trouble downloading on my phone. I'll try again later with the laptop.

Muledrvr

I seem to be having trouble downloading on my phone. I'll try again later with the laptop.

Muledrvr

I got an email just now. So slightly delayed, but yeah. Get an email for every single post you make. (2 while you send a message as well ;) )

Sindre Bjørnhjell

Yes. Been looking forward to the mail!

Yes I do and like Tony my work day is over now 😂 Fortunately I'm the boss so it's ok!

Just curious about something. Do you get an automatic email notification when a new chapter is posted?

Tefler

Sorry about that Tony Bates' employer. ;-)

Tefler

So.... your saying I won't be getting anything else done at work today?

Tony Bates


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