Three Square Meals Ch 64
Added 2016-12-01 19:45:30 +0000 UTCHello everyone!
I've finished chapter 64, and here it is!
I hope you enjoy this one, and I'll be looking forward to reading your feedback. :-)
Tefler
Comments
Fascinating. However, I think that Sakura should be given the chance to kill her former master. I am actually wondering if John might take the Raptor and hunt the Assassin, while Dana re-fits the ship. The Assassin would have to be making a run for it while the Invictus has broken down.
Benj
2016-12-06 23:50:48 +0000 UTCSo...John has to have sex with Sakura, Edreale, the three bodyguards, half a dozen Maliri techs...and all that probably in a day. Glad he can do that....would have killed me even when I was 18 and walking around with a constant woody....lol
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2016-12-06 20:55:20 +0000 UTCAlso.....a sparring match with the bodyguards...and the resulting payment for losing, would be hot.
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2016-12-06 20:52:57 +0000 UTCThis extra time would give Sakura time to develop and be part of the crew, provide some rest before gearing up for battle again, and relieve the Maliri women who need his attention. Also, anyone think Sakura would be able to help train Edrale's bodyguards?
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2016-12-06 20:52:14 +0000 UTCI am so looking forward to John and crew saving Calara's family. After that, though, and before they go hunting for the head assassin, they need to hack the specs for the singularity drivers while at Olympus for their awards and then high tail it to Maliri space to upgrade the Invictus. The assassin still has no clue about John, the girls, and the ship's capabilities.
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2016-12-06 20:50:09 +0000 UTCReally liked it Tefler. I just realized today how this patreon thing is working out for you. I'm very happy for you! you've earned it and will continue to do so I am sure.
2016-12-04 18:17:07 +0000 UTCWelcome to the club, Frank. You're now a 3SM junkie like the rest of us.
Jedi Khan
2016-12-03 23:33:24 +0000 UTCI must admit, I'm hooked. I found this in SOL a few days ago and now I find myself eagerly awaiting the next chapter. This is as addictive as Mike Cropo's Wolves and Dragons of the Blood series!
2016-12-03 23:05:48 +0000 UTCThree Square Meals?
DCM
2016-12-03 17:12:08 +0000 UTCSaw a clerk in a store with champagne white hair and gray blue eyes. An intriguing look in her eyes. I so wanted to ask...heave yo read
DCM
2016-12-03 17:11:51 +0000 UTCYou just had to post this shortly before I had to go to work, didn't you? Couldn't read it at work, so read it after; it was a welcome respite from thoughts of work. Wasn't quite expecting Lynton to possibly be a thrall of the other Progenitor, but it makes sense considering how she was hiding her appearance. After PJ took out the Glowing Queen, that probably tipped of the other Progenitor via his matriarch that he now had competition. So he's probably ordered his thralls to either avoid contact with John or hide their appearance from him in order to not tip him off that they are thralls. Fat lot of good that did Admiral Lynton. Here's hoping she can be captured alive without a big fight.
Jedi Khan
2016-12-03 13:39:07 +0000 UTCBrilliant thought! Using the psi detector in the room of admirals would have been a great idea. Curious if it could be modified to a larger scale to work as a ship sensor.
2016-12-03 06:34:11 +0000 UTCThis was awesome can't wait until the next one I almost feel sorry for them lizards
Mark Hall
2016-12-03 04:26:36 +0000 UTCDidn't Dana build a device to see the flows of power connecting John and the Girls. Seems this device would work on Gabrielle and who ever else was connected to the other Progenitor including any other traitor???
2016-12-03 02:54:44 +0000 UTCWhen I saw it was up I squealed like a little girl. Maw was worried, askinig if I was OK. LOL.
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2016-12-02 22:59:40 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter! Wasn't expecting the twist with Mateo. Shipboard security is one thing but she could also help on away missions I wonder if Sakura would be a good sparing partner for John. We still have Yamamoto in the wings. Will he also teach Sakura? How much technique did she retain? Maybe even some sparing with the Maliri assasians/bodyguards to improve. I would love to see some sparing between Luna and John. It seemed to me, of all the lizards they fought so far only the Royal Guard had regenerative powers. I do have to agree with Ben C., a good chance for a twist depending on what else they find in the mines. Perhaps an ousted royal family. Chapter size was perfect for this section of the plot.
2016-12-02 20:38:04 +0000 UTCOnce again..surprises! I hope the combines stress of all of these different projects and performance needs don't lead to an equipment failure!
DCM
2016-12-02 15:15:46 +0000 UTCForward to reading more.
Benj
2016-12-02 15:07:42 +0000 UTCYes, I agree that our communal distress stems from the onset of waiting for your next installment. We fans are insatiable. That said, I did not expect the rescue mission or withdrawal twists. Might the Kirrix be planning an attack on earth? As for poor Mateo, I hope that he lives. Calara and Irillth are the only ones with family. I wonder what/who else they might find in the mines. Those lizards have regenerative powers so he might have sent political prisoners to suffer a fate worse than death in the mines. Lastly, I do not know how being a security guard is as amazing as the other girls powers. I look
Benj
2016-12-02 15:07:09 +0000 UTCOnce again another edge of our seat ride. Thank you for sharing with us. As it's been said many times before we're all addicted and need our next fix π
2016-12-02 12:11:18 +0000 UTCVery well done. I think we're all grateful that you're making an effort to be as prolific as you are.
2016-12-02 06:29:26 +0000 UTCYour writing skill is superb, always the highlight of my day when another chapter comes out
RikcPaTT
2016-12-02 02:26:34 +0000 UTCThis one had it all. Tenderness, intrigue, political maneuvering, suspicion, trust building, manipulation. Even I am having to grudgingly kick your writing up another notch. You are better than Isomov ever was. And on par with Steven R. Donaldson and Tolkien.
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2016-12-02 00:35:03 +0000 UTC"I'll try and avoid posting chapters on the 1st in the future." Wash your mind out with soap! Don't start getting ideas about delaying anything! WE NEED OUR FIX!!
2016-12-02 00:34:29 +0000 UTCloved it as always, bring on the next few chapters
rich ed
2016-12-02 00:14:11 +0000 UTCAnother fantastic chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Anthony Kester
2016-12-02 00:02:43 +0000 UTCIt seems that the Patreon site gets huge amounts of traffic on the first of the month. I guess the servers get overloaded with all the pledge processing. I'll try and avoid posting chapters on the 1st in the future.
Tefler
2016-12-01 23:08:39 +0000 UTCGreat! I'm glad you guys enjoyed it. :-)
Tefler
2016-12-01 23:07:34 +0000 UTCAgreed, absolutely awesome. Thanks for sharing with us.....
2016-12-01 22:43:23 +0000 UTCAbsolutely awesome as always. I'm already itching to read more. A wonderful author, and an awesome story. Keep up the amazing work.
Anonamoose
2016-12-01 22:04:04 +0000 UTC