Three Square Meals Ch 62
Added 2016-11-14 23:56:11 +0000 UTCChapter 62 is now finished!
It was an interesting chapter to write, so I hope you enjoy reading it.
Tefler
Comments
Cody: I am thinking a trap set up to kill him and the Invictus...perhaps not the entire fleet. But they are not barganing on the Invictus having the additional upgrades, giving them an unsurmountable tactical advantage in that sector where they are headed.
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2016-11-16 22:27:43 +0000 UTCI like your thinking Ben.
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2016-11-16 22:23:53 +0000 UTCI did not expect the link between the assasin cyborg tech and the Malari. It makes sense, but shouldn't Ed know more and could guide John, particularly given her age. Also, Dana should use some of the tech to improve the armor, or at least be decimated by the mesh suit. Might the cyborg brain help Faye? If John can build limbs and organs, why can't he build a full clone body with a cyborg brain for Faye? The progenitors created Jade with a crystal heart. Maybe John could create Faye with a Alyssium brain using some sort of hybrid of the crew's DNA, making her their biological cousin. Just a thought from a fan, not to be taken seriously. It is fun to think about.
Benj
2016-11-15 22:44:40 +0000 UTCThanks guys! Glad to hear you enjoyed it. :-)
Tefler
2016-11-15 20:08:31 +0000 UTCThanks Tefler, I did enjoy reading it, twice already. Your ability to spin an EPIC tale has kept me enthralled. (no pun intended) Looking forward to the next exciting chapter!
2016-11-15 15:23:54 +0000 UTCBetter and better. That scene with Maddox went exactly as I thought it would but my dialogue was more like "I'm going to the dragon March either way, but one way involves seeing how much the foot of a rear admiral fits up your ass." Can't wait for where this goes!
Patrick
2016-11-15 06:34:54 +0000 UTCDamnit tefler just when I think someone can't be redeemed you go and redeem them great chapter sir
Mark Hall
2016-11-15 06:18:02 +0000 UTCHmmm
Muledrvr
2016-11-15 03:43:07 +0000 UTCOk....things are getting interesting.
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2016-11-15 03:21:07 +0000 UTCHmm...... Interesting revelations about Sakura(?) was it? I rather thought there was a history behind her. Once again.... We're off on a side trip. I suspect something fishy going on with Lynton. Having "comms problems" due to an attack is awful convenient, given the current situation in the area. And how she addressed John was a red flag, they haven't heeded yet. I think it was an innocuous call for help. We shall see in the coming chapters...
Muledrvr
2016-11-15 03:10:12 +0000 UTCThanks for the read
Cody Strong
2016-11-15 03:03:18 +0000 UTCAnd they run smack into the main enemy force.
Cody Strong
2016-11-15 03:02:23 +0000 UTCwooo time to read......
Muledrvr
2016-11-15 01:33:24 +0000 UTCDammit. ... I have another hour and a half to drive. ... grr.... Can't wait to read this.
Muledrvr
2016-11-15 00:00:32 +0000 UTCYes! Something to read after this waay too exciting round of Chess world championship. :)
Sindre Bjørnhjell
2016-11-15 00:00:21 +0000 UTC