Three Square Meals Ch 61
Added 2016-11-04 22:29:40 +0000 UTCHey everyone!
I've finished Chapter 61, and here it is for you, days before it gets released on Literotica!
I hope you enjoy it.
Tefler
Comments
Oh that never even crossed my mind(about the dragon March bring minor). The last time they were in the dragon March was one of my favorite parts so far. I also don't see a way it can be minor....John usually has rank and reputation on his side, but that won't be the case this time. Shitting down the second AI rebellion will be basically unknown due to the quiet war the federation is trying to make a huge advance in. It has been comms down as the earth admiral said. There could be easily 20 people higher ranked than him there.
Patrick
2016-11-09 05:18:55 +0000 UTCI want to visit Jade's home planet to see what is there now. Okay, and everything else too!
DCM
2016-11-08 13:57:25 +0000 UTCGreat addition, particularly the description of Jade's heart. I am looking forward to hear more about the Assassin and how her backstory links to the sensei. Also a brief update on her boss and the origins of cyborg tech (pirates). He is evil and powerful, but he may contract a bigger nemesis to take out John. My guess is that the Dragon March is going to be minor, because we do not want the crew killing federation troops. So far, it seems like Dragon march, get award, pick up sister, and return to valaden. My guess is the boss assassin will screw up their plans.
Benj
2016-11-07 12:47:10 +0000 UTCEveryone one of my hunches have turned out wrong. But then, that just makes the story even better.
DCM
2016-11-07 03:16:46 +0000 UTCTefler, PLEASE have John get back in touch with Sensei! Last time he saw John he was about to be assassinated.
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2016-11-07 01:17:11 +0000 UTCNice heartwarming read
Mick Peaper
2016-11-06 21:18:13 +0000 UTCThe building of anticipation for Dragon March has been insane.... Absolutely insane. Take your time and make it epic!
Patrick
2016-11-06 05:54:17 +0000 UTCQuestions answered, and more raised.... lol Good chapter.
Muledrvr
2016-11-05 16:10:27 +0000 UTCGlad to hear you guys liked the chapter. Well done to those of you who guessed who Radiant Alyssa was. :-)
Tefler
2016-11-05 14:49:15 +0000 UTCHeartwarming! I love how long this story is that it allows chapters like this. It's like watching a really long tv series that fits in a Halloween or Christmas special episode.
Patrick
2016-11-05 09:09:42 +0000 UTCThx for the read; it was a very satisfying filler
Cody Strong
2016-11-05 02:52:50 +0000 UTCTefler! Thank you for verifying I was right about Alyssa! I Knew it! Loved the chapter. I nice and emotional reprieve from the action of the last two. A great and heart warming read!
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
2016-11-05 01:31:08 +0000 UTCgreat chapter. love your writing
rich ed
2016-11-05 01:06:45 +0000 UTCWoo something to read at work tomorrow 😀
Axi
2016-11-04 22:51:27 +0000 UTC
