Three Square Meals Ch 63

As I wait for the next installment (not complaining), i re-read the initial episodes. Three ideas came to mind. First, Alyssa is a truly great character and I would like to hear more about her phiianthropic achievements. Why can't Terran orphans be sent to Ed as a means to give them a better life. I could imagine a whole planet dedicated to helping wayward children who are escaping war and poverty. Second, I imagine that the Assassin was sent by the karron miner as his last dying act of revenge against John. This would tie up a loose end. Lastly, irillth's sister will be a great opportunity to expand the progenitor backstory. I was unhappy that humans were created out of bordom, not that we are anything special. What I believe is that humans are similar to painting, which contains a small part of the artist's soul. Progenitor shed species like we create poetry. Some days we are prolific and others we just sleep in. Even if you were to meet a progenitor, that being will be vastly different from any other progenitor and evolving. The sister may be more of an art historIan (with biographies,of various progenitors and their creations) than a scientist.

Benj

What about Alyssa? She is a progenitor now... I am not enthusiastic about the idea, but she may develop her own healing powers. On a similar note, might Sakura regain her hulk-like strength, dexterity, indestructible skin, and other sensory powers when healed? I can imagine her and Calara double teaming John. John needs to be humbled to grow.

Benj

I've had that same thought about healing men with severe injuries. My rational thought was I would do what it takes to save someone.... but I'm not sure how it would read.

Tony Bates

Curious how you'll handle Calara's father and brother fates in Chapter 64. Killing them off would get you a couple steps closer to having the Terran girls all be orphans. Clears up some loose ends with potential immortality if all your friends or family died tragically at an early age. On the other hand having Calara's beg John to allow Jade to use John's cum to heal them from horrific injuries would be a different twist

Dave2282

Another great chapter. Loved seeing the battle from the enemies pov, nice contrast to the bubbly feelings in the invictus. Alyssa is coming into her own progenitorness, John is gonna have some adjustments to make. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Alvin Hogwash

Another excellent chapter!

Must agree that it was somewhat predictable. But it was amazing nonetheless. Seeing John's family expand (whether he wants it or not) is really satisfying.

It was kind of predictable but I couldn't put it down. Sakura wants to go to law school? No, she wants revenge duh saw that coming and XO in charge of recruitment will get the matter sorted and decided. Also the scene with Jade as catgirl has to be among the best evah!

Hinterlands Man

Another great chapter. the only problem is I've got to wait again for the next installment ;-)

VT

Great chapter as usual but again with the cliffhanger! I can't wait to see John knock the fleet admiral down a peg or 2 when they meet.

Amazingly good chapter as always. I look forward to seeing what Sakura chooses to do.

Anonamoose

absolutely awesome Tefler. now back to the agonizing waiting period.

Actually: Loved it.

PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.

I just cannot believe you left us hanging like that AGAIN! lol. I am beginning to think I am a masochist.

PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.

Awesome as usual.....

Muledrvr

All I have to say is DAMN that was a good chapter.

Anthony Kester