Three Square Meals Ch. 163 (completed)
Added 2023-06-30 20:44:44 +0000 UTCHey everyone,
Here's the completed version of chapter 163. I've added a # symbol where the previous text ended, so just search for that it you don't want to reread the first half.
Please let me know if you spot any typos and I'll fix them as you find them.
I hope you enjoy it!
Best wishes,
Tefler
Comments
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jdg45
2024-02-09 05:52:57 +0000 UTCSurely someone knows his condition
Randy
2023-12-11 18:53:11 +0000 UTCAnyone had any word on tefler
Randy
2023-12-11 18:52:33 +0000 UTCI miss you.
Servo1969
2023-10-13 23:18:01 +0000 UTCNah its a correct spelling. I think you must have been disorientated when you were reading that passage ;)
Unresolved Plots
2023-09-05 22:26:32 +0000 UTCRe: Chapter 146, Pg 57 Disorientated >> disoriented; disorientated is not a word & even if it is, in the twisted UK version of our mutual language, it shouldn't be & you shouldn't use it. Makes you sound like an idjit, which you certainly are not. GeoD
George Dennison
2023-09-05 02:21:08 +0000 UTC.57: ... at EOM 31 July, poor Tef did send what he had (errors and all) of chapter #164, approx. 9.6K words, about half a chapter, ... all of it was pretty good, ... still patiently awaiting more pages, .... ;-) ttfn
Michael56Smith
2023-08-04 00:41:39 +0000 UTC.56: It is the 18th of July, and according to some earlier status updates, .... Tef might finally be ready for his Gall bladder removal surgery later this month or possibly early next month at a bigger / better hospital, .... So, I am guessing that we might be close to a cut off time, similar to Tef's EOM deadlines, and we might just see a few new words, maybe even a whole chapter #164, ... wouldn't that be nice? Fingers are crossed for Tef's good health, .... and to have him once again slaving away on TSM installments very soon (I know, that's my self-interest speaking for me, but what can I say, .... I want to see Gahl'kalgor get his Progenitor ass royally stomped on, .... and to see what else those Maliri Males might have up their cloaked sleeves, .... a superpowered up Nova Lance maybe? That can blow Thrall shields away, ... wouldn't that be nice? And I really want the very next part in chapter #164, when the Thrall fleets are all confused by the great firepower of the invisible weapons platform, plus the Invictus, plus the Maliri Males cloaked battleships, .... oh, those thrall fleets are so toast! And I do hope that that arrogant Asshat Kal, does a wormhole jump there to see what's up, .... and gets some of his immortal tail feathers singed, "run away, Kal, run away," ... ;-) TTFN
Michael56Smith
2023-07-19 03:50:04 +0000 UTCMy original reaction to John's rapid set of orders was that he wanted to draw Gahl from Venkalas to him to stop the carnage. Then, since John would have a wormhole generator and Gahl wouldn't, whenever things got too hairy he could just leave. But that thought went away when I realized that 1) he has nymphs on the station and wouldn't leave them to Gahl's tender mercies and 2) he wouldn't leave the space station undefended. and risk losing a few hundred thousand Maliri makes So I'm eager to see the outcome of this strategy. Because right now I don't completely get it. Partially, but not completely
Str8NotNarrow
2023-07-07 13:45:08 +0000 UTCAbsolutely fantastic chapter! Looking forward to when you finish 164. Thanks!
bjcreek
2023-07-01 03:44:17 +0000 UTCjust one to pay bills with
Michael56Smith
2023-07-01 03:24:46 +0000 UTCcute
Michael56Smith
2023-07-01 03:24:05 +0000 UTC.43: , found another oops, two dropped letters, in Word page 103 of 117, ... Daphne tells John about triggering the explosive Munitions to separate the added-on living modules from the Genwynn station weapon platform, "... can be triggered from with (s/b within) the command centre,..." wonderful story, thank you, ... ;-) ttfn
Michael56Smith
2023-07-01 03:14:43 +0000 UTCThanks, Tefler!
Bp Hlpt
2023-07-01 02:36:54 +0000 UTCBe prepared for 2 more placeholders
Dallas Bell
2023-07-01 02:29:41 +0000 UTCand can be triggered from with the station’s command centre,
Koa
2023-07-01 02:09:17 +0000 UTCI've noticed it throughout the writing but I really want to say that I think using John as the method of "scene transition" is really well done.
Josh
2023-07-01 02:09:14 +0000 UTCexcitements s/b excitement, no?
Evan
2023-07-01 02:05:54 +0000 UTCValkyire s/b Valkyrie, no?
Evan
2023-07-01 02:03:45 +0000 UTCA couple of Quantum Devastators will definitely help evens the odds.”
Koa
2023-07-01 01:55:21 +0000 UTCAnother cliff-hanger. Most excellent.
Antoine Scrivener
2023-07-01 01:32:45 +0000 UTC
