Homework part 11 promo
Added 2024-04-02 17:48:38 +0000 UTCHello everyone!
Let's find out how Stephanie's escape from the professor and Kelly ended ;)
In a few days.
Comments
Hello JT Mereness! That's great! I always love feedback, it's very important to me. Especially constructive criticism! Sometimes i have to use different techniques to show the growth of our beautiful heroines and in the case of Kelly's growth, it was conceived in such a way that Kelly herself (along with the viewer) did not quite understand what was happening, she just grows, but does not see it... But this happens extremely rarely (it may have happened only a few times), the fact is that I myself like this approach (well, for a change), but yes, I agree that growth needs to be shown in all details so as not to hide anything from the viewer. And of course I will take this into account in future works. Once again, thank you so much for your comment, it helps to get better!
John Torred
2024-04-05 13:55:08 +0000 UTCi do like this comic it does have one good tf in it but to be honest Kelly's tf was a bit confusing and underwhelming though your tf usually revolve around blurring two images together it does show where to look for what is changing in the tf it is the reason why i like Tina's tf better. the reason why is that it Kelly's tf kinda happens off screen and she should have been shown a face reconstruction since between each the panels where Tina is talking Kelly's glasses go from perfectly straight to almost coming of on the next panel that Kelly talks. I get that your going for Kelly to not notice the tf but the audience doesn't have to be included in the mystery. the problem also is seen in Chinese tea and breaking fat however those tf are excusable since they are meant to shock the audience as to how the changes have affected those characters and in Chinese tea we are given a glimpse on the main characters tf while in her bed making use more excited for the results. if i were to rate these comics tf that have this type of transformation style of keeping the audience slightly in the dark as to what is going on i give Homework Kelly's tf a 2/10, breaking fat Melissa's tf a 4/10 due to good shock value however it was overused in later panels and Chinese tea Lucy's tf a 8/10 because the shower tf was confusing tf however it was compensated with a excellent teaser tf in bed a excellence use of keeping the audience on their toes until the stunning reveal of Lucy's sexier and stronger new body. not to mention that the audience would see the second tf after the car accident with the blurr transformation style. This is not me bing mean to your as an artist but some constructive criticism for later tf panels. Since i love your work and my personal favorite was ai gym since you can see the tf of Emma in a quite revealing gym outfit. In fact i am surprise you didn't go for the revealing route in Breaking Fat you had a opportunity when Melissa had her cloths off sure she was fat in that panel but from my point of view and knowing how most of your audience is into girls transforming into muscular goddesses we wouldn't mind seeing the fat loss and others changes if those changes are a stepping stone to that ascension.
JT Mereness
2024-04-03 20:17:57 +0000 UTC
