New Description for Sarah

Hello everyone! So, I've been working on a new description for Sarah and I decided to change up how I do descriptions by adding a little spice into them. I want to redo May's first three descriptions kind of like this, and eventual all of her other descriptions and other NPC's descriptions like this, but I want to know what you guys think of this new style. So, here is the new description for Sarah's girthy weight stage. (Its quite long)

Sarah has really let herself go recently. Her weight has continued to grow at a rapid pace and her physical activity has plummeted. You remember seeing her in the courtyard running laps, but you now struggle to picture the women in front of you waddling more than a few dozen steps down a hallway without stopping to take a break, let alone running miles. Not to mention how much of a slob she has become. Crumbs and stains on her dress and face, sweat marks on the fabric that clings to her rolls and an overall lack of personal hygiene have all become the norm for her. Opposite the decrease in hygiene she has seen an increase in her gluttony, she’s always snacking and drinking, and if she's not snacking or drinking she’s stuffing herself. Gosh, you can’t wait to see how big this piggy is going to get.  

Bringing yourself back to reality you decide to give the whale of a woman in front of you a more indepth look over, after all there is so much to see and you wouldn’t want to miss a single roll. 

Starting with her face the first thing you notice is how sweaty she is. Her forehead is covered in a shine of sweat, you watch as beads of it form and run down her beet red face. Her cheeks have filled out with fat, giving her face a cute rounded appearance, making her look more motherly. Complementing her rounder cheeks are her chocolate lips that have recently filled out, you can imagine that her lips are incredibly soft and that she would make for an incredibly great kissing partner, not to mention a great cuddler. Her jawline has softened further with the crease of her double chin moving further back towards, warping around her jawline moving towards the hing of her jaw in an effort to completely bury every inch of it. Her double chin has grown thicker and has started to obscure more and more of her neck as it grows thicker, there also seems to be a small triple chin forming, adding one more chin to her growing number. Caught in the cease of her double chin, and aided by her sweaty face, are a few crumbs, left over from her last feast. 

Your eyes catch a few drops of sweat drip off her chin and land on her chest with a silent ‘plop’. The fabric on her chest is dark with sweat, upon further inspection you notice that almost every inch of her dress is damp with sweat to a lesser extent, with her armpits, chest, under her breasts, her belly rolls, her belly’s overhang and under her rolls being major exceptions. You have no idea how she has possibly gotten so sweaty from simply waddling around, but you don’t mind it, the sweat makes her dress cling to her folds and rolls even better.       

 Her breasts have only gotten fatter, your eyes trace their outline through her sweaty dress. As your eyes approach where her breasts rest on top of her belly the fabric grows darker. You don’t see signs of a bra or anything, other than her upper belly, holding her massive milk barrels up. You’re surprised by her breasts' ability to retain their shape, but she also seems to have gotten lucky with her upper belly roll so adequately acting as a built-in shelf to support her growing breasts. 

No miniscule detail escapes your all knowing gaze, you easily spot her sweat stains, it would be hard to miss them anyways, you’re also able to easily discern several food and beverage stains that have attempted to blend in with the massive sweaty spot on her chest. The most interesting thing you’re able to spot however is something you hadn’t expected to see; her erect nipples, poking into the tight, moist, fabric of her dress. Given how sweaty and red she is, their erectness obviously isn’t a result of a chilly castle, it seems like Sarah is quite aroused at the moment. Unfortunately you haven’t the foggiest idea of why your overfed engineer is aroused, your best guess is that she likes being fat and likes being a lazy, slobby, piggy who is constantly stared at or humiliated even more. But that's just a theory, a fat theory.

 Holding up her massive, sweaty, crumb catching breasts is her thick, upper belly roll. Her upper belly is a large, jutting roll of fat whose sole purpose seems to be supporting her massive breasts. It also seems to be quite the sweat magnet as the sweat from her breasts and cleavage seems to naturally run towards this roll. Her upper belly roll runs around to either side of her, as it runs around her rib cage it tilts upwards and intersects the large rolls covering her shoulder blades. 

Well, this is what you assume is what’s happening as her massive arms obstruct your view of her sides for the most part. Each of her biceps is as thick as a normal person's thigh, however her biceps have almost zero muscle, insead being covered in a thick layer of blubber. You can imagine that moving those massive arms around is quite a difficult task. You can just picture her struggling to get dressed, trying to stuff her arms into the sleeves of her dress and then pulling the dress over her girthy body. Her forearms, just like her upper arm, are coated in a more than generous layer of lard, giving her wrist a nice little roll. Her fingers have plumped up like over stuffed sausages, you can imagine that her porky fingers struggle to grab bottles, which is probably why she is such a stain magnate.

Supporting her comparably tiny upper belly roll is her gargantuan lower belly roll. This massively thick roll starts at her sides with it resting atop her hip before it wraps around her, sagging down to her lower thigh. You can imagine that she struggles to waddle easily as her already overworked legs have to push it up and down, though you get the feeling she enjoys the thick heavy roll slapping against her thighs and, probably, her juicy fupa. You also can imagine that any self pleasure regarding her sex is most likely impossible due to how her arms are pushed out as well as how large her gut is, not to mention that she probably has a large fupa as the last line of defense.

Your mind runs wild with the possibilities of how she gets off, maybe she has some help? Maybe she uses some kind of contraption she made? Maybe she has a lover who assists her? Or maybe she's a pent up piggy who’s desperate to cum. 

While her belly and breasts are massive, her lower body is a bit larger, giving her a bottom heavy hourglass shape. Her hips are wide, wider than most chairs and doorways, which acts as an excellent foundation for her fat upper body and an even better foundation for a massive jiggly ass and titanicly thick thighs. Her hips are completely made out of fat, with any solid bone or muscle being buried in at least a foot or so of pure, sexy, jiggly lard. One might expect her hips to be rather saggy, but surprisingly they’re quite perky, though this is probably due to her massive thighs holding up her hips and supporting them. 

Following the curve of her hips towards you, begin to inspect her thighs. Her thighs are massive to say the least, each one is absolutely massive, you can hardly believe that she can even walk with how thick they are. You can imagine that if she could spread her legs all the way open, and without her belly filling the space immediately, that her inner thigh fat would still touch. 

You can’t help but wonder how penetration of any sort could be possible. Between her giant belly that sags down to her lower thighs, her fat fupa, thick pussy lips and her monstrous thighs  you struggle to see how anyone could easily and effectively make love to this overfed pig. Then again, you imagine that most of that lard would be pretty easy to move out of the way, with her belly being an exception, and you can imagine that all that soft squishy, sweaty lard would make her an excellent horizontal-charleston partner.  

Sarah's largest asset is, well, her ass. There are many terms you could see to describe her ass, double wide, chair crusher, horse breaker, doorway filler, bench smotherer, and many, many more that you’ve heard guards refer to her as, though your favorite one by far would have to be “The stool executioner”. She got this name after she broke six stools in a pub in one night, apparently the pub has created a tally on a wall of her kill count, last you heard it was at twenty-seven stools, three chairs, one table and two floor boards. What’s more shocking to you is that the pub has nightly bets of what she’s going to break next, apparently it's more than enough to replace everything her ass crushes.  

Sarah’s ass itself is a massive jiggly mass contained in a dress that has no business containing it. The fabric is spread tightly across her soft ass, letting you see every detail of it, every bit of cellulite, every jiggle, every little detail of its expansive surface. You love to watch it jiggle and bounce as she waddles by, you imagine that it makes just about any surface comfortable to sit on. Her ass sticks out about a foot and a half being her, creating a large, soft, sweaty ass shelf that one could easily use as a desk, if they didn’t mind they’re papers becoming moist with sweat. 

Overall Sarah is shaping out to be quite the massive piggy, you’re so excited to see how much bigger she becomes and even more excited to see how much further she’ll descend into gluttony and hedonism.