The Bet Part 24 (Final)
Added 2024-05-29 02:46:25 +0000 UTCHi guys! Part 24 of the Bet is ready. I hope you guys enjoy the ending. This was the first story I ever wrote and I’m glad so many people liked it. I have started a new story and plan to start another one so there will be two stories on rotation. I hope you guys will like them and will continue to support me. As always thank you for all the continued support!
Comments
Thanks for the feedback! I will take that into consideration for the future
John Proctor
2024-06-01 05:44:32 +0000 UTCcan we get that folder at the end? maybe uploaded on imgchest
bvk
2024-05-30 03:39:12 +0000 UTCIt feels like they both got off scott free. Comedically, it would've been fitting for her to get knocked up and not know which ones the Dad I guess. There's the idea she could've dropped all of them after he tricked her and moved on. Then there'd be the out of left field idea she could've gone away from the main two, we find out she's been screwing the third guy behind both their backs as he's the only one who doesn't treat her like a toy, or neglect her etc. Many possibilities. But ultimately it probably ended the most realistic way where assholes get away with stuff :)
Weresmurf
2024-05-29 22:20:31 +0000 UTCThank you! What kind of consequences were you wishing for if you don’t mind sharing
John Proctor
2024-05-29 22:15:43 +0000 UTCThank you! Glad you enjoyed it
John Proctor
2024-05-29 22:15:00 +0000 UTCnice Story~ <3
Sarana
2024-05-29 07:48:39 +0000 UTCAll good. It's an ok ending, just wish there were actual consequences for her to some degree. Still, good job
Weresmurf
2024-05-29 03:19:12 +0000 UTCFixed. Thanks for letting me know!
John Proctor
2024-05-29 03:10:31 +0000 UTCThat’s my bad. I will fix it. I’m just so used to putting that once I’m done
John Proctor
2024-05-29 03:02:39 +0000 UTCWhys it say tbc?
Weresmurf
2024-05-29 03:01:07 +0000 UTC
