I want your feedback

Thanks for the feedback, Yeah I definitely want to keep some contrast between the characters I create, Many artist get comfortable and sticks to the same style and shapes, I'm also planning on making their skin tone very different from each other as well. P.S. maybe subconsciously i don't know.

nacnac

Me neither.

nacnac

Thanks, I'll keep em coming.

nacnac

Can't wait to see how much of that log fits inside of her.

I'll start by admitting I have an overwhelming bias towards full-package futa on female content, because it's my thing. On that alone, I can't wait for you to do more with this. That aside, I'm not really the type of guy to care what the story to my porn is, but having a dynamic beyond "here is two or more people fucking" is definitely a plus, so it's nice to see you fleshing out characters. Also, something I think may be a genuinely helpful insight: I believe contrast to be the primary rule of porn. The difference between partners is often the very fetish itself, i.e. interracial fetish, age difference fetish, dominant on submissive, fat on skinny, etc. This trickles down to even small details such as hair color, eye color, clothing and accessories, and the gamut of fantasy accoutrement (horns, tails, wings, etc.) With these two characters you have covered a high range of contrasts: warrior vs. noncombatant, different race, muscular vs. soft body, age difference, size difference, barbaric vs. civilized, and stud vs. virgin. All of these things have inherent sexual appeal for many people, and almost all of them are rather "harmless," or neutral, by which I mean they aren't terribly risky to include in your art (like scat or gore), because even if someone isn't turned on by them, they probably won't be turned off. P.S. If "Blackfoot" is a Dave Chappelle reference, then I love you even more than I did.

Vincent

I like the contrast between them. As Kei said, I'm also looking forward to more content about them.

SR500

Thanks for the input, I'm thinking that Ragna is kind of a tribe chieftain kind of character and therefore bigger than most other orcs, If I ever get to the gangbang part I'll have Jassy take on all kind of shapes and sizes :D

nacnac

Thanks man!

nacnac

I'm liking everything presented here. The visuals, the backstory, the information. It all ties together well in my opinion. I'm looking forward to more!

Kei Montague

My thoughts: I know you like the longer sized male genitals. I, myself, am not into them being that long, but it does go with the backstory. Shorter and fatter, I think, would probably be just as effective, unless Elves and other beings can elongate their vaginal canals over 7 inches. A fat 10 inch penis would work and still look great when flaccid. The elf is great. Love the backstory and her abilities as well as her obsession. Wouldn't change her except to make her breasts...not bigger but fatter (more mass). But she is a true elf, I suspect, and would not have a reason for breasts like that, I guess. I do like where you are headed with this, though. Good job.

Jbtrimar