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Chapter 6 - Celestial Ascendant

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Pay off of Atticus' story is a long time a coming, friend. I wouldn't say this is all set up. After all, this is a direct answer to the first scene of the story

Mosef

I understand that. But I feel the hook back to the first chap (the Precursors acting but then finding out shit aint going to be easy) fits better like this

Mosef

I liked it, but I feel like it should have been the first chapter of this book after the timeline instead of happening in the middle of the action.

Lictor Magnus

Definitely an interesting chapter, I feel like this was all set up though. So I'm definitely eagerly waiting for the pay-off.

Kyle Pemberton

Fantastic chapter. Waiting so long for an Atticus chapter and It was an extremely good payoff. I'm interested to see how this God State plays into the power levels previously explained. Are the 6 Quasi (whatever the name was) all in this state of power. Do all citizens have this transformation but it expresses so much weaker because they entered it weaker? I am fascinated to find out how this plays. Perhaps the 6 Quasi's is just more propaganda and Atticus and Emily are truly still ahead by several orders of magnitude even above the current cap which Yui is stated to be at. Also makes me think that lady who is making device to hide from the sight is just hopelessly playing into Atticus hand, or perhaps she is the dark horse from the precursors.... I'm so invested. Good chapter, thank you!

Viola

Fascinating, if I understand it right Atticus and Emily are as close to precursors as a being can be now. But in doing so they fundamentally changed the nature of their existence. Also the insidious nature of the enemy and lengths Atticus has gone to combat them truly is horrifying. Really captured the essence of grim dark in this chapter. Thank you for the update and as always looking forward to the next one.

Hello

TFTC came back it was good (tho like someone else said it should have been the first chap) but it was still a nice read.

Cinema Man

Of the chapter? You're a fast reader lol. No, no more of this chapter though I will review it tomorrow and polish it a little. What did you think of it?

Mosef

Interesting..... are there more?

Monzter E

Thanks for the chapter

JustAGuy

Thanks!

YUL07


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