EDE Vol. 1 pt. 5 (18+)
Added 2018-05-24 19:02:40 +0000 UTChttps://drive.google.com/open?id=13Ua3vePP3ucwjJASYEBygScfXZvFgeES
so how 'bout dat FEEDBACK
This is my first time even trying to write a proper LitRPG with tables and stats and stuff, so yeah, feedback greatly appreciated. I can easily change stuff up until this story goes public, but after that, I've got to stick with what I've got.
Also, I removed that very last line, but I don't really think I need to upload a new PDF just to get rid of one super short sentence at the very end.
