Tara and Karl Chapter 4: Page 19
Added 2020-05-26 12:01:00 +0000 UTC
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Janet: "Diplomatic im-Mana-ty!" Demon Queen: "It's just been REVOKED."
Dollmistress
2020-05-26 20:46:59 +0000 UTCLOL! I wondered if anyone would notice that it was a shoe shop they were in front of.
Harlock
2020-05-26 18:55:35 +0000 UTCQuick, someone check that background shoe shop for Karl :D
Dollmistress
2020-05-26 18:12:00 +0000 UTCDQ showing today why she wears the crown.
Asani
2020-05-26 17:16:10 +0000 UTCThanks.
Harlock
2020-05-26 15:23:58 +0000 UTCA couple of typo/grammar corrections: "let" should be "let's", and "picks her up by her neck" is clunky, consider "picks her up by the neck" instead. Also not sure if it should be "The Demon Queen" instead of just "Demon Queen", in the narration box at the start.
Dollmistress
2020-05-26 13:34:15 +0000 UTCNah he was brand new, straight off a mannequin. If he got purchased then he won't be disposed of so fast. But he might still be in the store the shop borrows them from
Sean McDermott
2020-05-26 13:29:36 +0000 UTCMeanwhile, Karl is in the discount bin at a Thrift store.....
Mike K
2020-05-26 12:54:47 +0000 UTCThe beginning of the end.....
Mike K
2020-05-26 12:54:12 +0000 UTC
