About Chapter 26
Added 2024-10-02 12:26:32 +0000 UTCHello everyone!
Following yesterday's release of version 0.11 and Act IX, I got a lot of feedback concerning Chapter 26.
Most of you seem to have reservations about the place of Nathan in this chapter. Most notably, the way he seems to be set-up as a "second boyfriend". While I want to give Nathan a special place in the story, my goal is not to have him act as another boyfriend to Laura.
On top of that, the "reclaiming" part of it puts him as another "cuck", which is not really I was aiming for either.
Well, I've heard you loud and clear! Version 0.12 will include a partial rewrite of Chapter 26, to avoid those issues. He will still be set-up to fuck Laura after another bull has, but not in the same way.
I hope this change will make this chapter more faithful to the way I want Nathan to be shown.
Thanks to you all for your valuable feedback. It helps me steer the story in a way most of you will enjoy. I hope these changes will please you. π
Comments
I think the solution to this is to give Nathan less of a spotlight in general. That wouldn't necessarily mean that you have to constantly add new named characters, but more random men that Laura decides to fuck would be nice and shift away from the idea that Nathan is the focus here. If any one man besides MC should be a focus, it should probably be like a childhood friend/best friend of MC or something. A story revolved around that could be fun.
Zorg
2024-10-18 23:34:43 +0000 UTCthe dates she has with him are boyfriend activities
inaire
2024-10-18 03:46:49 +0000 UTCI like the direction you are going, no complaints here. NTR/S fans are so diverse in particulars so its hard to make everyone happy. Make sure you don't lose sight of your own passion for the project. I've seen developers give up on projects over this. Do what you think is best! Great work! :D
Enrico
2024-10-03 21:31:08 +0000 UTCI personally liked it and I wouldn't mind if Nathan did stay as a 2nd boyfriend, I think there is something weirdly wholesome and erotic about it. But if you think your straying from your own vision then absolutely do what you need to do. On a personal note, this has been my favourite act to date!
ZER0
2024-10-03 12:20:13 +0000 UTCYeeeah for when the story eventually concludes, if it concludes with Laura having a second boyfriend, I'm always going to assume her and Protag won't last
George Costanza
2024-10-03 03:23:11 +0000 UTCI agree. Great decision to rewrite his role. Also...when are we going to see some raw sex and possible cleanup? :)
Max Dewey
2024-10-02 21:05:53 +0000 UTCFascinating landscape in the background of this photo btw.
Modsognir
2024-10-02 20:37:48 +0000 UTCThanks for the update on the feedback regarding the recent update. Iβm on the fence on how I feel about it myself. On one hand the interaction was pretty hot but on another it felt weird with how βinvolvedβ Nathan was. I figured introducing a character like Oliver into the story would be divisive but I think that goes more to show your skills as a writer and making an immersive story and characters. Iβm planning to keep two different dominate saves to see the different content: one where Oliver is involved and another where he isnβt. Keep up the great work, Stag!
Neelis
2024-10-02 16:27:04 +0000 UTCGood to hear you listening to people. Still hope Oliver get to shine, I enjoyed is dominant personality in contrast to Nathan. It allow for more diversity. Would love if the bull shared pictures of Laura on their own during encounters to spice up the event. Oliver sharing pics of Laura enjoying herself and Nathan Photoshop of previous pictures. The ones in earlier chapters were nice.
Saemrath
2024-10-02 16:05:33 +0000 UTCThe only dev I know that listens to his community and is communicating a lot
Hans Graf
2024-10-02 14:16:10 +0000 UTCI didn't have issues either, tho I did get the same feeling (like he is another cuck. To me it felt like the player is still the number 1 boyfriend tho). I can't wait for FFM threesomes anyomre tho! I'd love to see it soon! :3
ha haha
2024-10-02 14:15:21 +0000 UTCThose are good news! Thanks for listening to the fans of the game. I'm excited for new chapters and I think I would like to replay the chapter.
Boenz
2024-10-02 13:30:39 +0000 UTCThank you for paying attention to feedback and being willing to rework Chapter 26 ! Looking forward to it and to the future of this great game !
My Love Is Your Love
2024-10-02 13:10:03 +0000 UTCYou won't have to replay Chapter 26, but since future chapters will be written based on the rewrite, it may be more coherent if you did.
Le Stag
2024-10-02 12:43:55 +0000 UTCThank you for the advice. For the data do we need to redo the chapter to follow the rewrite or it is already comprehensive in the update?
Nemo88
2024-10-02 12:31:23 +0000 UTCI had no issues with the chapter, but a solution could be having threesomes with the two bulls, shown to the MC. But youβre probably working up to that for future updates
seekkale
2024-10-02 12:30:15 +0000 UTCThank you for listening
Csampion
2024-10-02 12:28:21 +0000 UTC
