marnic

Valkyria Chronciles Futanari Comic Rough Pages

Added 2020-08-10 03:30:37 +0000 UTC

Hello!

So I've been working on roughing out the layout for the comic pages from the current project.

I think the dialogue and super rough poses still tell the story really well. I hope I can polish these pages up to look great over time. There are still 4 more pages to finish telling the story but I still wanted to post what I had done in during the week.

I tried hard to make the panelling easy and exciting to read this time. I also tried to fix some stuff I learned over the last few comic projects. I'm also making a cover and a title for the comic this time!

I'd love to hear everyones opinions so far. Thank you so much for the patience. I feel like this part is the hardest, as I have to be most creative with the dialogue, poses and panelling right now!