Pic Fic: Deku Vs Uraraka
Added 2021-03-22 22:45:28 +0000 UTCStory Contains: mixed wrestling, maledom, PoV, humiliation, Deku, Uraraka, My Hero Academia
Story Blurb: You enjoy watching a live wrestling match between Deku and Uraraka
Author’s Note: I don’t actually know anything about Hero Aca (I only watched like the first seven episodes), so I apologize to the legit fans if my characterizations are whack :P. This isn’t even really a story, more an experiment in PoV - and probably a failed one at that. I normally write from the PoV of whoever loses the fight, because I find you can often get the juiciest details by focusing on the character in the most distress, but this time I decided to try second person. Most authors put the “You” character in the actual fight, but I was curious to see how the story would read if “You” were just a spectator.
I’m curious to know what you guys think of the experiment. Let me know in the comments, and thanks in advance for reading ^^
Comments
Yeah, it doesn't quite work. It was a fun little experiment, but I don't see myself trying anymore like this.
Jub
2021-03-23 04:59:06 +0000 UTCIt was interesting. It was cool to have a different point of view but I agree that it’s a bit more enjoyable from the characters perspective 🤔
Reginald Hester
2021-03-23 04:19:01 +0000 UTC