The issue with Forbidden Fruit.
Added 2021-09-08 17:05:09 +0000 UTCForbidden Fruit was the first series from which I deviated away from Markus and Andrea to follow two new characters, Vincent and Carl. (who have a similar dynamic to M/A). I had a rough plan laid out for what I wanted to do, but when I came around to the next part, I kind of had no idea what I wanted to do any more and went on to other things.
So I wanted to ask you, what do you want to see in Forbidden Fruit? I had a sort of a beach episode planned where they go out and get laid as Maxine and Thessa, but it had no real plot or developments so i thought it wasn't good enough.
I will first finish the mini chapter, that won't be long and will be out soon.
Please let me know what you think, and what you'd like to see. This comment section is open to ALL PATRONS, feel free to voice your preferences on Forbidden Fruit.
Thanks,
Sam
P.S. I wanted to remind you that next month we will have TWO patreon voted stories in stead of one, so you can comission me for the low price of 10 euro's a month!
Comments
Tell stories about the main character before he told his friend about the costume gun.
Ben
2021-09-30 05:34:34 +0000 UTCVincent and Carl get into Grace's skinsuit together and go out to the disco. There, they meet Carl's friend from work who is a die-hard lesbian, but after discovering the existence of the skinsuits, she decides to join Carl and Vincent's games.
Cerkiew 16
2021-09-09 13:30:34 +0000 UTCVincent and Carl as Maxine and Thessa have a sleepover ( or a stay over for like two days maximum) at Thessa's house. During the stay they play a game of trying to rile and tease each other while trying to maintain the deception of just being platonic friends around Thessa's parents.
Eb18
2021-09-08 20:08:45 +0000 UTC10 years have passed since the last chapter. Skinsuit are public knowledge but the technology behind it is still really rare. Vincent and Carl have become enemies, one trying to use the skinsuit for good/concensual while the other is just in it for fun and doesn't care about the ethics, what other think about them or what happens to the victim. "It doesn't matter what you do, they will always treat us as freaks. They will never accept you. To think I would've went with you into battle against the whole world, but no matter how bad the world gets, you don't want to be against it, do you? you just want to be part of it." loads of domination plays and hate fucking,
Not my Real Name
2021-09-08 19:42:36 +0000 UTC
