ときのそらゾファー兵化 part.1 English.Ver
Added 2025-03-01 02:34:47 +0000 UTCAs always, thank you for supporting me. notice: i'm currently working on a dinaranger What If story. set loosely after the last volume. after seeing many support on this time story i Made, I decide to make my own version of Dina Ranger itself. i hope you will continue to support me further into the future. Thank you, see you next time
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awesome, cant wait for part 2
爆笑天帝(ロルロード)
2025-06-22 14:10:32 +0000 UTCI actually have a bad taste, which is to see Maya, who becomes ZoFa Queen, and her general mothers caressing each other, kissing each other, violating each other with their genitals, and saying loving words to each other, so as to deepen the "mother-daughter" relationship.(Actually, I mainly want to see ZoFa generals show their erotic side in front of important people,And that person is Maya.)
Todd Liu
2025-03-13 04:43:05 +0000 UTCI originally thought that Shiori would become Chimera ZoFa, but this is also a good idea
Todd Liu
2025-03-13 04:37:39 +0000 UTCShiori holds out for days, as her family and friends continually violate her (and the tentacles take over whenever they're needed elsewhere.) Finally, after at least a week, she breaks. Still fully lucid, Shiori begs to have her humanity taken away. The generals then do not remove the IV, and instead turn down the drip rate just enough that the ZoFa Cells can begin to affect her head and mind. For 8 long hours, Shiori feels her mental faculties slip away from her, bit by bit, while all of her family and friends surround her in an orgy. As the last of her sanity slips away, Shiori thinks about how grateful she is to ZoFa for all they've done for her. In the end, Shiori becomes a normal ZoFa Soldier. The Generals note that this Soldier is completely immune to Anti-ZoFa and can't go back to being human at all. They announce that all new ZoFa recruits will be subjected to this process from now on... The end.
axelkrafte
2025-03-12 13:01:17 +0000 UTCWell, tentacle porn could work, but I think the final chapter needs to play to the unique aspects of the ZoFa cells. (Also, Shiori's the final girl. She needs to be the "star" of the last chapter. Maya's had her time.) Picture this: Shiori is kept fully restrained by tentacles, which can hold her in any desired position. A tiny tentacle is hooked into her neck, injecting Anti-ZoFa like an IV drip. Shiori's family and friends take turns spreading ZoFa cells on her and violating her, but the Anti-ZoFa prevents her head or brain from being corrupted, so she feels the full effects of the ZoFa cells while remaining completely lucid. The Generals say they'll only remove the IV drip if she swears loyalty to ZoFa.
axelkrafte
2025-03-12 12:48:24 +0000 UTCIndeed, what you said is exactly the same as the novel about zofa I saw on pixiv.I actually hope that Maya is the one who gets brainwashed in the end, after all, she is the queen of Zofa, and the ones who further corrupt her are Ghana, Sierra, Benan, Saki, Saori, Miki, Shiori, Kamimura, and other friends.（I would rather see the zofa tentacles wrap around all the zofa soldiers, invading their nipples, futanari, pussies, buttocks, belly buttons, and brains, making them climax until they don't want to stop, caressing and kissing each other.）
Todd Liu
2025-03-08 08:29:46 +0000 UTCI wouldn't recommend that; seems like too much work. One thing's for sure, they definitely need to kill off that smarmy douchebag Zengo Fujiwara, ideally at the hands of one of the Generals. From there, I think it would be interesting for the story to wrap up as follows: The Generals collectively decide to administer Anti-ZoFa cells to every soldier and chimera, turning them all human again. But in a shocking twist, everybody who was once part of ZoFa says they don't want to go back to being human; they prefer to be brainwashed and live in eternal pleasure. Even Maya, Miki, and Saori all want to be part of ZoFa. When Shiori hears that her sister, her mother, and her friends would rather abandon her for ZoFa, she breaks completely. In tears, she asks her family and friends to convert her, and they happily oblige.
axelkrafte
2025-03-03 21:27:22 +0000 UTCIf you want to make your own version of dinaranger, you can try a dual ending version, a good ending and a bad ending.
Todd Liu
2025-03-01 16:12:29 +0000 UTCCommendable effort, but there are a few of discrepancies between the English and Japanese versions. Here's what I noticed, Page 2: In Japanese, the civilians are described as being both brainwashed and transformed. The Zofa Soldiers form the vanguard, which English doesn't specify. Page 3: In Japanese, she is referred to as a woman, but in English she's just called an individual. Page 4: In Japanese, the first line is, "She fought alone, but she never ran away and stood firm." Most of the line was cut in translation. Page 5: In Japanese, the first line is, "Her lonely battle was heartbreaking." The English is less dramatic, for some reason. Page 9: In Japanese, Saori tells Sora she will "serve the cause, and pledge her loyalty to ZOFA." In English, there's no mention of pledging loyalty. Page 20: In Japanese, Sora mentions "everyone's faces". The English "their faces" is even more vague.
axelkrafte
2025-03-01 11:59:45 +0000 UTC
