(SPOILER) Tongtian's Three Temporal Incarnation
Added 2023-09-22 13:01:00 +0000 UTCThe one on the left is Shitian, the Past Incarnation. Middle is Shangtian, her Present Incarnation, and the right one is Tonggu, her Future Incarnation.
I love it, but I feel that Tonggu kinda doesn't fit in. She does conform to the savage and barbarian female Pangu I was going for, but she seems a bit too cliche. However, I can't think of anything, so it will have to do for now.
What do you guys think?
Comments
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Yong Cho
2023-09-27 05:53:10 +0000 UTCThe first half of Book 2 is already on Patreon
KaiserBlak
2023-09-23 15:35:35 +0000 UTCI think it's better to post each chapter in patreon after you finish it even if the update time is inconsistent rather than publishing it all together
Vangelis Theodoratos
2023-09-23 10:27:06 +0000 UTCYes
Vangelis Theodoratos
2023-09-23 10:25:15 +0000 UTCThey feel a bit too civilized for me. Since Tonggu is basically a female Pangu, I don't want any sort of fabric on her except things like fur or leather.
KaiserBlak
2023-09-23 04:48:53 +0000 UTCVietnam: Ba Trieu https://chaohanoi.com/2020/05/03/badass-women-of-vietnamese-history-ba-trieu/?cn-reloaded=1 Mongolian https://www.reddit.com/r/ImaginAsian/comments/mrho4a/mongolian_warrior_woman_by_bayarmagnai_avirmed/ Indian https://playgroundai.com/post/clmfw409w03s6s601gr0b648x Polynesian https://playgroundai.com/post/clldg5sks0hxqs601kao74hsu The Indian and Polynesian images look the closest to what you already have while feeling more "Asian barbarian" to me. I got the images from a google image search using the phrase "ancient _______ warrior women"
Caleb Bear
2023-09-23 01:04:06 +0000 UTCYes
KaiserBlak
2023-09-22 23:12:56 +0000 UTCwhich one, tonggu?
KaiserBlak
2023-09-22 23:12:53 +0000 UTCHave a image reference?
KaiserBlak
2023-09-22 23:12:45 +0000 UTCThe first half of book 2 is already done, and after I finish the second half, I will have it posted on RR
KaiserBlak
2023-09-22 23:11:44 +0000 UTCMight need to re read to catch back up then
CrusaderHandrail
2023-09-22 17:17:25 +0000 UTCWhen I finished the patron chapter available at the time she had just gotten her male corpse to sainthood. After the war of heaven
CrusaderHandrail
2023-09-22 17:17:14 +0000 UTCThat’s the end of book 1 you can find book 2 here in patreon
InPass
2023-09-22 17:15:43 +0000 UTCI think you mean Shitian instead of Tonggu. Also, since this is an Asian influenced world maybe make her look more like a "barbarian" from the steppes of northwest Asia, the jungles of southern Asia, the Indian subcontinent, or the islands of the Pacific. Right now she looks more like a Viking barbarian to me which is European.
Caleb Bear
2023-09-22 13:10:44 +0000 UTCI haven't seen an update for Tongtian in a while. Is it still being updated? Definitely my favorite of the three but it just kind of ended qt the creation of the tree and the ascension to sainthood (sort of)
CrusaderHandrail
2023-09-22 13:08:05 +0000 UTCSavage*
InPass
2023-09-22 13:05:38 +0000 UTCI always imagine Tonggu with like bronze skin with slightly less defined muscles and a more save expression/aura
InPass
2023-09-22 13:05:24 +0000 UTCTonggu does look out of place
InPass
2023-09-22 13:02:45 +0000 UTCIs the one above the main body
Vangelis Theodoratos
2023-09-22 13:02:41 +0000 UTCThe hairstyle doesn't fit
Vangelis Theodoratos
2023-09-22 13:02:30 +0000 UTCThis was my best one yet
Captdeth
2023-09-22 13:01:49 +0000 UTC3s
Captdeth
2023-09-22 13:01:21 +0000 UTC
