Early Look: Susan Honeymoon Scenes

Folder with all the angles 

Ever since uploading their wedding scene, I've always felt a bit guilty about how much I ended up glossing over their wedding. No like... proper build up where people just talk or hang out, just skipping straight to the point.

So with their honeymoon, I am trying to compensate for that a little bit. The story in its current state is at 2,5K words (kinda what it used to be) but there should be another 1000 left to go. And that is in the first draft, where I might end up adding more descriptions and giving things room to breathe.

And while I didn't intend to compensate for it in terms of imagery, I just ended up doing scene upon scene last weekend. Partially in part because I made some changes to Nathan as well as streamlined Susan's character file (which I have already done with Lexie and Ivana prior, and it saves so much on time). It doesn't exactly work as a collage, since there are quite a few NSFW images that don't exactly make sense as photographs. But I'll probably just end up bunching them together anyway.

Anyway, I'm sure you're wondering why Emi is there in between them! What originally was intended as a small cameo in the background or them talking to her father/uncle, just ended  up as them actually meeting Emi and Matthew. Just straight up.

Besides some fanservice of in how many ways Susan can blush about Emi, she does serve a purpose in the story. Perhaps it will end up being a bit heavy-handed or obvious in the story, but I hope it'll be a fun and engaging story nonetheless. I found that Susan consistently looked huge.... until Emi came into the spotlight.

So this also means Emi's story needs to speed up to match up to Susan, and catch to it up it will! I intend on uploading Emi's last pregnancy scene this weekend and the handful of post-preg scenes I have in mind. Once that is out of the way, there's nothing really stopping me from starting on her third pregnancy...