The Sixth School. Chapter 034.
Added 2023-08-29 09:19:37 +0000 UTCHi guys,
Here is Chapter Thirty Four.
As always, please do take the time to give me your feedback. It means a lot to me.
Enjoy.
Regards,
BlaQQuill.
Comments
Dungeon was an interesting concept curious about what its role ends up being for system. Eg a way for users to get items or like a training sim
Peter Pan
2023-09-04 08:29:54 +0000 UTCYeah, It did take a few chapters more than I initially intended. I initially thought that the dungeon would take up one or two chapters and I'd be done with it. I, however, wanted to capture the realism of the dungeon and the fact that it would pose real challenges to Greg. It wouldn't just be a walk in the park that Greg could easily beat and get rewards as a result. I've read books where the protag goes through a small challenge and gets disproportionately rewarded for it. I didn't want this to be that. Every single reward that Greg gets out if the dungeons will have to have been hard-earned and well-deserved. For me to achieve this I had to spend a little more time in the dungeons than I initially planned. Plus I had to build up to the issue with the soul bow in a logical way. Still, I hope I kept it interesting all through.
BlaQQuill
2023-08-30 07:19:09 +0000 UTCLots of useful information packed into a chapter! I’m also glad (ish) to see the time in the dungeon come to a close, I feel that if it had gone on for too much longer I’d lose the main thread of the story. A few chapters as a dungeon crawl every now and then seem like a good middle ground! Also interesting that even though the currency wasn’t *actually* handed over, the dungeon recognized the 200,000 coins as part of his score… meaning intent/promises do have a result on the total score. Looking forward to getting back to the ‘main’ quest line, but also very curious to see what you do with the next dungeon dive, and what the dungeon shop will look like! Love the chapter as always
Dennis Banfield
2023-08-29 20:08:45 +0000 UTC
