The Sixth School. Chapter 027.
Added 2023-07-18 04:11:22 +0000 UTCI'm really sorry for how long it took to get this chapter out. Not all Chapters are equally easy to write and this was one that required a lot of thinking from me.
I take my writing seriously and you guys even more seriously, so I'd never wanna put out shoddy or poorly thought out work. I could have easily written around the harder parts of the story just to keep outputting the chapters quickly, but I chose not to. I wanted to pur together something worth your time and money.
It took me like three days to think through the concept of willpower, what different levels of that would look like and entail and how someone could be trained in that. And then I had to put that in story format in a way that doesn't feel like I'm writing an office report on all the things I found out through brainstorming.
My motto is simple, I want to write in such a way that my readers would never know that 'he was struggling with this part' and I really think I managed to pull that off with this chapter.
I'm really looking forward to hear what you guys think of the chapter.
Enjoy.
Regards,
BlaQQuill.
Comments
Thanks Magnus, your understanding means a lot to me.
BlaQQuill
2023-07-19 04:04:08 +0000 UTCThanks a ton, Murky.
BlaQQuill
2023-07-19 04:02:54 +0000 UTCI like the current length of the chapters, doesn't matter if they take longer. Don't worry about having to deliver one every 5 days, if you stress too much it will just affect the quality.
Magnus
2023-07-18 18:53:00 +0000 UTC"Her how the town head can suppress the other three families and maintain a hold on the reins of power in this town,” She stated." - maybe Her = Nor? "He presently wasn’t In any condition to speak, so Olivia continued to speak." - remove cap. on "In" "If only a bitter, angry, jaded, or fearful husk of you survives the torture, then you haven’t really survived Greg,” She added" - called him Greg "The familiar, however, had picked .one of his own sensations and magnified it a thousandfold!" - ".one" should be "one"
Murky
2023-07-18 18:03:54 +0000 UTC
