Chapter 989: A Man Fought Monsters
Added 2025-02-19 22:00:10 +0000 UTCComments
Nice, I liked this one. Though, Iron Lions and no mention of Lion Voltron? Tyftc
Chloe
2026-02-15 02:02:24 +0000 UTCSeriously though. The Table of Contents with the previous/next links are chef’s kiss. It ruins me for the other authors.
DeAndrea H
2026-02-11 07:12:41 +0000 UTCI know this is probably not said enough, but I have followed a handful of authors on Patreon and shirt is the only one who links previous/ next chapters. I just wanna say how much I appreciate him doing that. Truly, thank you.
Cilantro
2026-02-02 23:09:49 +0000 UTCAll those avatars he had studying with Carlos could now be binge watching ALL THE THINGS, not just the stranger ones. ;;0)
Kristy Riedel
2025-09-29 10:23:15 +0000 UTCThis chapter was great. The beginning verses coming again at the end was amazing!
Talmadge Hires
2025-05-15 13:12:23 +0000 UTCI’m so here for Delia
Opossums Coat
2025-04-23 03:24:14 +0000 UTCThx for the chapter
Kconraw
2025-03-10 06:25:46 +0000 UTCHeh. Paul Burrell, Royal Butler to Diana, lives in Farndon just down the road. I'm guessing they would be able to relate
Carl Gherardi
2025-02-28 08:06:36 +0000 UTCIs Wrexham, Wales the seat of the Twisleton-Wykeham-Fiennes?
Carl Gherardi
2025-02-28 07:51:50 +0000 UTCOne of the best chapters. "You did good"
Bango
2025-02-26 03:43:30 +0000 UTCsame
Kay
2025-02-24 20:59:07 +0000 UTCWow, I’m crying. This was lovely. 🥹
Kelly
2025-02-23 15:12:42 +0000 UTCIf that wasn't a feel good chapter, I don't know what is
James Squibb
2025-02-22 19:03:23 +0000 UTCYeah I feel like Farrah is technically more of a Jiminy Cricket character. She is supposed to remind the hegemon of who he is when he forgets and begins to act all high and mighty. Kind of a jester of sorts but with power to back it up.
J W
2025-02-22 00:09:17 +0000 UTCI said it once I'll say it again. The easiest way to 'Trap'/Lockdown Jason and his troops for months on end is by opening up multiple Transformation zones. Use Jason 'Hero complex' and the power of 'friendship' against them. With them locked away trying to 'save the world' the villains will have time to play. Seems like that's what they are trying to do now. SMH. ----------- Man-o-man I feel for Shade. I cannot fathom spending eternity with ppl who find F grade movies like "Mandroid" or "Eliminators" as classic entertainment. Honestly, shouldn't there be a committee dedicated to getting Jason caught up on pop culture? Maybe after he does, he could stop referring to 80's Movies/TV shows, that nobody knows or really cared about even then! Not me thou... I loved me some Airwolf and Knight Rider. But not enough to still reference it 40/50YEARS after it ended. LOL Surely someone sat him down to watch (All depending on what yr the magic world stopped making movies) 'Cast Away', The Lion King, The Green Mile,Spartacus, Xena, Hercules, Shawshank Redemption, Gladiator, Home Alone 1,2,3 or Stranger Things! ANYTHING ELSE, just so that he has use of other nonsensical references. LOL Have a movie night and let Shade pick the selection! Its only fair!
RonGAR
2025-02-21 23:43:53 +0000 UTCThis one was special. Easily one of my favorites.
Douglas Sokolowski
2025-02-21 17:58:12 +0000 UTCSo weird. I lived in Bangor for a decade! Proper fun seeing it mentioned
Wheels42
2025-02-21 17:24:35 +0000 UTCYes, yes I do.
Kismet
2025-02-21 16:31:58 +0000 UTCLOL Sure
Jim Hudson
2025-02-21 12:36:12 +0000 UTCI think it was Trenchant Moore. Also perhaps another time around when Jason was defending a town whose defenses needed juice.
Trevor Counceller
2025-02-21 12:35:42 +0000 UTCLOL
Jim Hudson
2025-02-21 12:35:26 +0000 UTCNah. He's grown enough to handle it. At least outwardly. He'll say something about being embarrassed to Shade, though.
Bryan Jackson
2025-02-21 12:20:01 +0000 UTCThanks for saying that! I didn't realize it, but I totaly agree with every word in your comment 🥰
Zuzana Toulcová
2025-02-21 12:12:59 +0000 UTCI like how you write 🙂 would you happen to have some youtube or otherwise online lessons I could search up? My English is getting extremely rusty and I'd like to learn from you because it's refreshing 😀
Zuzana Toulcová
2025-02-21 12:10:54 +0000 UTCAlthough he is both and it's not contradictory in my mind 😌
Zuzana Toulcová
2025-02-21 12:04:36 +0000 UTCThey were silver, for Jason it was monster slaughtering ☠️
Zuzana Toulcová
2025-02-21 12:02:13 +0000 UTCIt was Trenchant Moore the Siegesword, sorry of i místopředseda miss spelled, I'm not local 😁 and it was in the book with flying islands on the cover 😆
Zuzana Toulcová
2025-02-21 11:59:44 +0000 UTCMaybe for Nik 🤪 she's low rank otherwise. Also, who'll protect the people there of she leaves?
Zuzana Toulcová
2025-02-21 11:57:03 +0000 UTCI like that.. earthlings but not humans ❤️
Zuzana Toulcová
2025-02-21 11:55:43 +0000 UTCWhat worries me was the mention of vampires and screams 😭🥺
Zuzana Toulcová
2025-02-21 11:53:07 +0000 UTCShirt please make it so 🥰🥰🥰 it's been a while since Jason found someone willing to do everything to protect the people including dying... please keep her 🥹🥹🥹
Zuzana Toulcová
2025-02-21 11:50:30 +0000 UTCDid you? Lucky you. But why the past tence?
Zuzana Toulcová
2025-02-21 11:48:27 +0000 UTCActually I think it's a mindset of a very few kids at least from what i remember here where I'm from
Zuzana Toulcová
2025-02-21 11:46:56 +0000 UTCRacial gift evolution worthy definitely!
Zuzana Toulcová
2025-02-21 11:44:06 +0000 UTCI'd like to know too 😄
Zuzana Toulcová
2025-02-21 11:42:58 +0000 UTCI dont think you can count her as his faithful - remember the discussion about her not voice of the will on tropical Island Jason created?
Zuzana Toulcová
2025-02-21 11:42:10 +0000 UTCNot me, reading a second time to solidify the impact of that last statement.
Michael Romo
2025-02-21 06:44:12 +0000 UTCon earth at least. While I agree with the sentiment, couldn't an argument be made that Farrah is also one of Jason's faithful. She keeps him in line and has absolute confidence in him doing what is right when it is needed despite all his quirks
Kalanaere
2025-02-21 05:54:57 +0000 UTCLet the Church of Jason be born and his High Priestess be known lol
Kalanaere
2025-02-21 05:53:44 +0000 UTCNow that you say it, I'm actually kind of disappointed in Shirt for not working the flat earthers into the storyline. Hell I'm sure Farrah would be happy to launch somebody into Orbit just to prove a point.
Kalanaere
2025-02-21 05:53:02 +0000 UTCWell you definitely have the wrathful god part on point. Said god also just turned a pack of iron lions into scrap.
Kalanaere
2025-02-21 05:51:42 +0000 UTC*perfect*
Michael Romo
2025-02-21 05:39:01 +0000 UTCTo be fair “weed” is a lot more commonly used to refer to it than “pot” is even here in America. By an order of magnitude. When I read “pot plant” I don’t immediately think of weed and I used to be a big pothead lmao
MoonlitShade
2025-02-21 05:11:52 +0000 UTCExactly.
jeffrey niski
2025-02-21 00:20:15 +0000 UTC"I'm John Miller, team cook"
Corvid
2025-02-21 00:18:35 +0000 UTCLast two chapters have been fire. Thoroughly enjoyed.
SomeGuyWhoReads
2025-02-20 23:46:47 +0000 UTCTaika and Travis became outworlders just as Jason did. They are all earthlings, but not humans.
Kristy Riedel
2025-02-20 23:46:36 +0000 UTCProbably yes. More so Belinda due to traps and trickery. I can't help but draw the parallel with her and Jason however. I don't remember the chapter and the plot thread has yet to be picked up but I recall someone being informed of Jason and his abilities and referring to him as an "affliction skirmisher". This chapter used the word skirmisher a few times.
Garrett Gibson
2025-02-20 21:54:33 +0000 UTCJason is either gonna get suddenly shy from her fan girling or he's gonna lie and play it off
jeffrey niski
2025-02-20 21:45:25 +0000 UTC+1 to rick
Will
2025-02-20 21:42:28 +0000 UTCAlso, technically I think Taika and Travis are outworlders now. I like thinking of them as Pallimustus stepchildren that’s great.
Daneen
2025-02-20 21:15:06 +0000 UTCThis was a very good chapter. 🙏
Tenebrous Savant (Metatron)
2025-02-20 20:06:36 +0000 UTCAnyone else really want to see a flame war between some flat earth internet troll and an inter dimensional reality assassin?
DasGoat622
2025-02-20 14:52:19 +0000 UTCSo the very first of Jason's faithful and a good show for Jason. Great read Thank yo so much.
Jim Hudson
2025-02-20 14:30:41 +0000 UTCAs someone who has studied (read: has advanced degrees in) the English language, and teaches the English language at the university level, you are being not just needlessly pedantic - you are being incorrectly pedantic. Diction, or word choice, is an aspect of grammar that is most commonly associated with formal writing, which prose and verse are not. Dialogue is an expression of the speech pattern of the character. Imagine how boring dialogue would be if every character spoke in formal English without the use of contractions? It would read like AI, because that is not how people speak the language. Or, in colloquial English, “That’s not how people talk.” Which is grammatically incorrect but a phrase in common usage.
Chris Furry
2025-02-20 14:18:00 +0000 UTCThanks for the culture info! Although I have good memories of friends and I seeing how many double meanings we could come up with while working in a greenhouse. Pass the pot was definitely an early one.
Jennifer Leigh
2025-02-20 12:52:52 +0000 UTCRR stubs any KU books, so those are gone, too.
Jennifer Leigh
2025-02-20 12:48:01 +0000 UTCProps on the double dissolution.
Stephen
2025-02-20 12:26:39 +0000 UTCSo the very first of Jason's faithful outside his realms.
J W
2025-02-20 12:09:33 +0000 UTCPatreon posts all come down when the book comes out. The comments with it
Michael Hawkins
2025-02-20 10:46:07 +0000 UTCZara did too
Ariel
2025-02-20 10:13:33 +0000 UTCThis is racial gift evolution AND scar making stuff
Ariel
2025-02-20 10:11:46 +0000 UTCOh yea, that's the good stuff
Ariel
2025-02-20 10:10:29 +0000 UTCYes, where two of her fingers used to be. TFTC
Oddrey
2025-02-20 10:01:35 +0000 UTCLove it!
Maria Klein
2025-02-20 09:31:06 +0000 UTCOne of my favorite chapters in a good long while They’re all good This one is just awesome
Abdulaziz ALRumaih
2025-02-20 07:21:19 +0000 UTCThat was such a good chapter
Jayson J
2025-02-20 06:40:48 +0000 UTCthat was fire, got me tearing up here.
Ben Ruland
2025-02-20 06:04:48 +0000 UTCSo is shade a Ryan Reynolds or rob mcelhenney fan?
Tim Johnson
2025-02-20 05:30:24 +0000 UTCGreat chapter!
KollegvomMirgan
2025-02-20 05:24:33 +0000 UTC*Mighty🐁 voice* "HeRe I come to save the DAAYYYY!"
Youkai-sama
2025-02-20 05:11:36 +0000 UTCNope. Taika and Travis are like Pallimustus stepchildren... that's where Taika really became an adventurer and trained, their way and immersed in their culture. And Travis should have been given a lord title in Rimaros for his deeds, and now he has a Palli wife and everything... And they were temp. Taika always wanted to leave, and Travis is a core-using non-adventurer. This new one has the heart of a Palli adventurer and has never been there. :)
bryan ortiz
2025-02-20 04:42:06 +0000 UTCI bet she has a scar! This is scar making stuff.
Hayden Leech
2025-02-20 04:25:30 +0000 UTCAlways love when Jason gets to do Hero Sh*t™.
Gilligan_Ng
2025-02-20 04:17:57 +0000 UTCI hope it makes you feel better being a bully.
Dylan Alexander
2025-02-20 04:13:19 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, thanks
Tom Roettger
2025-02-20 03:54:37 +0000 UTC10/10 chapter
Lewis Long
2025-02-20 03:21:28 +0000 UTCI really enjoyed Delia! You did a really great job expressing how capable and driven she is in an extremely small amount of words. I hope we get more action from her pov soon!
Robert Grasser
2025-02-20 03:21:07 +0000 UTCYou're being a pedantic ass. Good can be--and often is--used colloquially as an adverb. You could either say things are going pretty well or going pretty good, or that the charity does a lot of good. The phrase "You did good." has a completely different connotation and emotional impact than the phrase "You did well." in this context. Shut up and stop acting like using proper grammar in dialogue is anything other than an author's choice.
Sad Chemist
2025-02-20 02:54:23 +0000 UTCI was almost sure there was going to be a racial gift evolution coming for Delia. What a great chapter.
Chris Furry
2025-02-20 02:44:58 +0000 UTCLove this episode!!!
samwise
2025-02-20 02:44:02 +0000 UTCAbsolutely wonderful chapter!
Alicia Bolick
2025-02-20 02:30:00 +0000 UTCGreat chapter!
Victor Erickson
2025-02-20 02:13:08 +0000 UTCNah, they’re often called pot plants here in Australia. Mostly because we don’t call Cannabis “pot” here. It’s usually known as weed instead.
CringeWorthyStudios
2025-02-20 02:11:35 +0000 UTCOh I like that
Brad Gammey
2025-02-20 02:10:53 +0000 UTCHey Shirt… you did good
Samuel Strode
2025-02-20 02:10:31 +0000 UTCYou can try royal road but I don’t think the comments are as active
RGrocks
2025-02-20 02:06:11 +0000 UTCNow I have to read His Dark Materials again
Dennis
2025-02-20 02:04:43 +0000 UTCI listened to these on a friend's audible account. I'm loving going through these on patreon with the additional comments on every chapter. Is there an original place the chapters were released that has all the original commentary? Where could I find something like that?
Sabroso JFD!
2025-02-20 01:58:44 +0000 UTCMakes it even better than!
Samendio Mathieu
2025-02-20 01:45:51 +0000 UTCHold the line…..
BloodStorm
2025-02-20 01:40:20 +0000 UTCMaybe that’s the mind set of most kids
Justin
2025-02-20 01:18:41 +0000 UTCYeah but I mean from earth that was a legit child. Most people now still fear him from what we’ve seen
Justin
2025-02-20 01:18:24 +0000 UTCAnd Travis…
Andre Morales
2025-02-20 01:16:49 +0000 UTCTravis did as well along with Hump’s mom :)
Andre Morales
2025-02-20 01:15:10 +0000 UTCWhat? Taika doesn’t count?
Alejandro Piña
2025-02-20 00:51:05 +0000 UTCOutstanding chapter!
Dino
2025-02-20 00:50:46 +0000 UTCStill love Lenora and Barry!
Jennifer Leigh
2025-02-20 00:50:17 +0000 UTCSO GOOD
Jacob Trevino
2025-02-20 00:49:26 +0000 UTCFinally someone sees Jason for what he is from the moment they saw him
Justin
2025-02-20 00:36:55 +0000 UTCHehehehe
Sabroso JFD!
2025-02-20 00:30:47 +0000 UTCDamn onion ninjas. Fantastic chapter
Carl Gherardi
2025-02-20 00:29:48 +0000 UTCKnew member of them team 👀
Malcolm Gray
2025-02-20 00:25:28 +0000 UTCShe would be a good addition to one of the Asano village teams
Mike Zebill
2025-02-20 00:21:25 +0000 UTCI bet she could learn a lot from Clive and Belinda
Mike Zebill
2025-02-20 00:19:50 +0000 UTCIf you are referring to Jason in the quarry village he was still iron rank. He and his team didn't rank to bronze until they were in the Astral space.
Mike Zebill
2025-02-20 00:18:53 +0000 UTCNow she needs some time to heal. And she needs to meet someone who “runs a school”. I’m sure Jason knows a person or two to help her.
Danny G
2025-02-20 00:16:47 +0000 UTCIron ranker.
Kevin Clark
2025-02-20 00:16:15 +0000 UTCI didn't. Haha
Michael Romo
2025-02-20 00:07:29 +0000 UTCPot plant, I'm sure you meant potted plant. But imagining someone in asano village opening growing pot is hilarious.
Michael Romo
2025-02-19 23:58:31 +0000 UTCSeveral chapters ago a bronze ranker stood up to a silver rank water elemental just so a few people could survive. Now that same hold ranker witnessed a silver ranker giving every last bit of themselves to save some bronze rankers. The writing and call backs are so beautiful. I shed a tear 😢
Samendio Mathieu
2025-02-19 23:56:07 +0000 UTCOhhhh hellll yeeeesssssss
Tristan
2025-02-19 23:55:58 +0000 UTCThis. So much of what we have read of other people perspective about Jason is negative. Here is a young girl who saw the hero. Who recognized that the ‘superheroes’ were posers and that Jason sacrificed to save lives - and wanted to grow up to do the same. One of your best chapters recently. Thanks Shirt.
Clarke
2025-02-19 23:47:37 +0000 UTCI'm not crying, you're crying
Ruari Yeen
2025-02-19 23:46:52 +0000 UTCNow that was old school Jason. An adventurer, helping people. Delia's viewpoint of him as a hero was great.
Tarry Higgins
2025-02-19 23:45:59 +0000 UTCYay the World Came Knocking. And she gets to meet her Hero. Oh wait you're never supposed to meet your hero. Hmm
Justin Butler
2025-02-19 23:44:11 +0000 UTCGood isn’t an adverb, well is. You don’t say, ‘you did bad’. You say ‘ you didn’t do very well’ or ‘you did terribly’. In this case. ‘You did well’ or ‘you succeeded’.
Dylan Alexander
2025-02-19 23:40:49 +0000 UTCSometime is going to have a new friend
Sebastianos Ionnides
2025-02-19 23:37:46 +0000 UTCThank you for an excellent Chapter Shirt. The perfect pastry with light fluffy parts and dark chocolate parts. ;) "The body was an interdimensional shadow alien, Barry" reminded me of an old saying along the lines of Death is a constant companion, you need only look or speak over your left shoulder to know if its your time. It would be nice to have my own personal shade on my left shoulder to ask that question.
John Durrett
2025-02-19 23:34:46 +0000 UTCGreat chapter.
Scott Way
2025-02-19 23:23:49 +0000 UTCFirst earthling member??
bryan ortiz
2025-02-19 23:21:42 +0000 UTCYou did good is actually correct btw, "you did good" and "you did well" can mean different things and in this context both meanings work so your nitpick as actually wrong. You can look this up
Daniel is ŁØNE
2025-02-19 23:19:52 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2025-02-19 23:19:14 +0000 UTCFucking YAAAAAAY! EXCELLENT CHAPTER, man! Sooooo good!
Richard Bonds
2025-02-19 23:16:53 +0000 UTCNo mate, as an Australian he would have definitely said ‘you did good’. He may have even said ‘ya did good’.
Bonnie Leslie
2025-02-19 23:15:24 +0000 UTCtftc
gator mate
2025-02-19 23:05:09 +0000 UTCAww.
Stephanie Washburn
2025-02-19 23:04:32 +0000 UTCIn this case, it's an Australian dialect thing. So while written words might follow those rules, the accuracy to character and origin would overrule the technically correct English. It's like an accent. I believe the terminology is regiolect or regional dialect.
lockx
2025-02-19 23:03:44 +0000 UTCNew team member!
Trevor Mallow
2025-02-19 23:01:08 +0000 UTCYes. However, most people's spoken speech is not grammatically correct. Also, to many people, "You did well" and "You did good" do not mean exactly the same thing.
Seaspike
2025-02-19 22:59:33 +0000 UTCWas just thinking that...
Seaspike
2025-02-19 22:54:28 +0000 UTCOh God that was perfect! On point! Exactly what I wanted! "You did good"
Kim Santos
2025-02-19 22:48:44 +0000 UTCYeah. We could use an intergalactic hero about now. Maybe that hit so hard because I’m jealous that she got to fight monsters. 👺
Molly
2025-02-19 22:47:45 +0000 UTCThat was awesome
Adam
2025-02-19 22:45:46 +0000 UTCI think she should be taken on as jason’s apprentice
Fate Hydrax
2025-02-19 22:45:38 +0000 UTCDamn. Loved that chapter from word 1 to the last word. Well done!
Vodyinoi
2025-02-19 22:45:14 +0000 UTCOne of the best chapters in a while, be good to see him and the others get back to there roots clearing the boards saving people and building a solid reputation with the world, that would cause the remaning governments to completely loose leverage and power over him and solidify his reputation around the world.
Tex Northend
2025-02-19 22:43:47 +0000 UTCI love how this calls back to Jason fighting that silver rank monster to save the village in book 3.
Liy
2025-02-19 22:43:40 +0000 UTCHe fights monsters, he fights with monsters, and he fights against his own monsters
Vincent Ciavone
2025-02-19 22:43:04 +0000 UTCI love moments like these. Where Jason lives up to the hero image that the younger generation have of him. He doesn't see it. But all those closest to him do. He is the inspiration for so many.
Tina Young
2025-02-19 22:41:56 +0000 UTCThis was a great chat! Thanks Shirt!
ABTelford
2025-02-19 22:40:51 +0000 UTCI love everything about this chapter
James Rosado
2025-02-19 22:39:07 +0000 UTCWell I’m sorry, I studied the English language and these things just stick with me.
Dylan Alexander
2025-02-19 22:35:56 +0000 UTCThat's good, this chapter is a breeze of fresh air, outstanding storytelling. TYFTC
Bert Bertinelli
2025-02-19 22:33:53 +0000 UTCYou’re being needlessly pedantic. Word choice in dialogue is often attributed to a character’s speech patterns but if that’s not good enough, either could be acceptable here. She “did well” with a job well done OR she “did good” by fighting the good fight and standing between the bad guys and the people.
Joshua Konieczka
2025-02-19 22:32:44 +0000 UTCWeird time for it to rain I think you mean.. I had the same freak storm happen to me as well.
Iron Knight
2025-02-19 22:31:59 +0000 UTCNobody likes pedants. Ever
Pierce
2025-02-19 22:31:53 +0000 UTCI’m sorry but is shade a reds fan?
Evan Fog
2025-02-19 22:31:35 +0000 UTCThis is modern prose. Jason would say "You did good."
Soli116
2025-02-19 22:31:31 +0000 UTCWow what a chapter, that was amazing, thank you Shirt
Walter Kimberly
2025-02-19 22:29:23 +0000 UTCOh yeah that's what I'm talking about. I love me some monster hunting
Jeff
2025-02-19 22:28:40 +0000 UTCThis is what this story is about, when it’s at its best. Heroes getting to be heroes The little ones like Delia and the big ones like Jason. Sophie cleansing cities, the rest of the team for sure being awesome And just a little snark from a guy named Barry
Pierce
2025-02-19 22:28:38 +0000 UTCAhh! Some good, old-fashioned heroing! Just a little, as a treat. ;)
Joanna
2025-02-19 22:27:40 +0000 UTCMost excellent chapter
David Collins
2025-02-19 22:26:25 +0000 UTCIn correct English it’s do well. Look it up. You’d say ‘I did well’. instead of ‘I did good’.
Dylan Alexander
2025-02-19 22:24:38 +0000 UTCExcellent chapter
Zachary Blevins
2025-02-19 22:24:18 +0000 UTCThis might be the best chapter I have read in awhile. But maybe that is just because of all the real life iron lions I am starting to see circle us in the world. Resistance takes many forms.
Justin Hunsberger
2025-02-19 22:22:50 +0000 UTCThis time I read this with Pants!
James Culbreath
2025-02-19 22:22:42 +0000 UTCNo its definitely ‘did good’ might be an Aussie thing but ‘done well’ or ‘did good’
John Collier
2025-02-19 22:21:36 +0000 UTC💯
Taran Rhynsburger
2025-02-19 22:21:17 +0000 UTCDang it Shirt, I wasn't planning on crying today.
JC Weiss
2025-02-19 22:21:02 +0000 UTCRight!? And who doesn’t want to hear those words from their hero? Ah, satisfaction ❤️
Chiqui Joy
2025-02-19 22:21:01 +0000 UTCI too had tears welling up.
JonO
2025-02-19 22:20:32 +0000 UTCI honestly hope she gets a fabulous scar and title for that. She'd have to have at least a gift evolution. I like this girl and want her to thrive.
JonO
2025-02-19 22:19:26 +0000 UTC"you did good" might be the best line in this entire story. Seriously, I've got chills
Nick
2025-02-19 22:18:55 +0000 UTCRight? She has maybe 1/3-1/2 of this chapter, and already I feel proud of her and want to see more of her.
David Petersen
2025-02-19 22:18:52 +0000 UTCKinda helps set the insane time table we have here
Charles A. Pehl
2025-02-19 22:17:36 +0000 UTCI love how every chapter of this story makes me feel.
ReadingObsessed
2025-02-19 22:17:05 +0000 UTCThis is what i came to say. Also Jason being the hero is exactly what earth needs and what his "identity" needs to make jason loved by everyone again
Jacob Goodrich
2025-02-19 22:15:49 +0000 UTCIt's nice to see Jason being seen as a hero instead of just a scary monster in the dark.
Zack
2025-02-19 22:14:28 +0000 UTCSeeing Jason's, positive impact on people growing up 🌟
FabianTheGreat
2025-02-19 22:14:22 +0000 UTCbest chapter in a while.
mockery jones
2025-02-19 22:14:09 +0000 UTCIt did make me tear up lol.
David Petersen
2025-02-19 22:11:59 +0000 UTCMe too. Echoes of Jason standing against the elemental in that village, so long ago and a world away.
Skade
2025-02-19 22:11:53 +0000 UTCIt’s did well not did good.
Dylan Alexander
2025-02-19 22:10:57 +0000 UTCThis was good.
Tabitha Patrick
2025-02-19 22:10:45 +0000 UTCgoddess that “you did good” almost made me cry 🥹
Reed M
2025-02-19 22:10:26 +0000 UTCAw Delia - you did such a good job. Someone said something on Monday about how well-crafted these graceful little snippets are — just enough insight into a character to make you care about a person that never was… i haven’t slept in 2 days so I’m a little maudlin, but I feel so proud of her.
Molly
2025-02-19 22:09:53 +0000 UTCBiscuits!
Arieh Sochaczevski
2025-02-19 22:08:08 +0000 UTCShirt is on one. I think this may be one of the best chapters written chapters in the whole series. That little “as a girl” motif is killer. TFTC!!!!!
Bingus McCready
2025-02-19 22:07:49 +0000 UTCSo many times I’ve seen the dark side of the story, it’s nice to see the bright side of heroism. Glad Jason made it in time to save Delia
mhaj58
2025-02-19 22:06:14 +0000 UTCGreat chapter hope she becomes a regular, she's dedicated
Daniel Everest
2025-02-19 22:06:03 +0000 UTCFirst time being busy at work has paid off. Getting to read Two chapters back to back
JDPEI97
2025-02-19 22:03:48 +0000 UTC4th
Meruem92
2025-02-19 22:02:12 +0000 UTC3rd
Meruem92
2025-02-19 22:02:08 +0000 UTCWoohoo
Justin Edwards
2025-02-19 22:00:22 +0000 UTCFurst
Gage Gros
2025-02-19 22:00:19 +0000 UTCBiscuits!
Ryan Pepp
2025-02-19 22:00:17 +0000 UTCFirst
Raphe Salmon
2025-02-19 22:00:17 +0000 UTCBiscuits tyftc
Darkdragon
2025-02-19 22:00:15 +0000 UTC
